Blyker wrote:This is kinde freaky you know.
I just reread whole subjugation yesterday even though i was halfway in some other stories i just had to reread subjugation.... and then the day after Fell posts a new chapter... creepy
But now im gonna read this
Fel wrote:MARBLES! F@#%ING MARBLES!!!!!!!
Hmmm..Phantom wrote:Sheriff Teasle: Are you telling me that 200 of our men against your boy is a no-win situation for us?
Col. Trautman: You send that many, don't forget one thing. ...
Sheriff Teasle: What?
Col. Trautman: A good supply of Marble bags! Phantom
It's a story. It's the future. Things are different. Maybe a great deal of NY was wiped out when first invaded and a number of new streets were added after that?slater wrote:theres no West 72nd Street in Brooklyn. Sorry to burst your bubble. It Stops at West 13th Street. After that point its bensonhurst and its on a different system.
In manhattan theres a W 72nd Street. Which is a 2 way street.
If you couldn't tell im from NY.
The problem with guerillia warfare is that its so hard to defend agaisnt. You are always reacting until you know the location of the guerillias. The same thing here with the highly decorated black ops person. There is no way she can defend agaisnt most things. Sure she will come up with possible targets but still. The fact that Jason doesnt only target in the USA perimeter anymore but also in space makes it even ahrder to defend. If he would be smart he would also make a few strikes on other places in the world just to spread out the attention of the defenders but also to set the other barons up against the American Baron (who is male btw...?)avitchel wrote:Great chapter, I'm glad that you had fun writing it, because we definitely enjoyed reading it. The Trilanes are not having fun learning about unconventional warfare are they? The Lt from Black Ops seems to be too junior to have the entire task of Jason and the rest of his team. Especially after all of the current setbacks. I assume that you'll find some way to politically interfere with her effectiveness. Is this the only current Imperial reaction to the 'Crisis on Earth'? Just awesome Fel, thanks for sharing!
I have read this story like 5 times and it has big possibilities and branches and continuation.wildph wrote:As much as I look forward to new sub chapters, I'm going to be equally disappointed when you finally finish the story.
I hope you can work up a reason to write more in the subjugation universe afterwards... even if it involved a different main character or covered a different point in time.
XW
