Overall, a great story.
I think that there is something missing from this sentence in Chaper 13:
"It was decided earlier that nobody that was part of the rebellion should know about the rebellion."
And there is something out of kilter here:
“That’s something that my sister will have to explain to you,” she answered. “She’s already there, Jason. You need to go there. Now. And you need to do what you’ve always done when you meet my sister. Do you understand?”
But the last time Jason met Kate's sister(when he got the fake ID's), he wasn't wearing the armor.
Too bad I can't access this Forum via email - I really am not too fond of these web based thingys. Oh well.