Mind that this story is not over. It just catches up to the point in Revolution that it needs to be so the next chapter of Revolution doesn't spoil this story.
Enjoy.
Citadel Online.
Citadel Online.
I think I fixed everything...at least I hope I did. But to warn you now, after doing all that proofreading, I didn't run spellchecker on any chapter. I was too annoyed. So endure the typos.
Mind that this story is not over. It just catches up to the point in Revolution that it needs to be so the next chapter of Revolution doesn't spoil this story.
Enjoy.
Mind that this story is not over. It just catches up to the point in Revolution that it needs to be so the next chapter of Revolution doesn't spoil this story.
Enjoy.
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Just another guy from the shallow end of the gene pool.
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Redwolf1331
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Re: Citadel Online.
Thanks Fel, looking forward to reading this!
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firedrake3
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Re: Citadel Online.
Thanks Fel. Looking forward to reading it. By the way for You it maybe is a short story but for most authors it would be a novel or two.
An objective definition of "Political Correctness":
"A doctrine fostered by a delusional, illogical, liberal minority, and
rabidly promoted by an unscrupulous mainstream media, which holds forth the
proposition that it is entirely possible to pick up a turd by the clean end."
"A doctrine fostered by a delusional, illogical, liberal minority, and
rabidly promoted by an unscrupulous mainstream media, which holds forth the
proposition that it is entirely possible to pick up a turd by the clean end."
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Blacktiger
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Re: Citadel Online.
There can be only one! FEL ! 
Re: Citadel Online.
WOW! Thanks Fel!
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Re: Citadel Online.
Great, now I have something to do while Tropical Storm Imelda squats on us here in Houston!
Re: Citadel Online.
1.5 MByte of the story - and only work-days in the near future...
This is a small emerging crisis and drastic measures are needed. The garten must wait!
This is a small emerging crisis and drastic measures are needed. The garten must wait!
More power to the werewolves!
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scooter012
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Re: Citadel Online.
thank you Fel
much appreciated
much appreciated
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SoronelHaetir
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Re: Citadel Online.
Fel,
This was awesome, thank you so much.
This was awesome, thank you so much.
Re: Citadel Online.
Thanks Fel looking forward to the read.
Re: Citadel Online.
Thank you Fel. Gives me something to look forward to this afternoon. 
"Let's be Very Careful out there people!"
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calista241
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Re: Citadel Online.
this is amazing. i love this style story.
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