Unification, chapter 8.

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Great Chapter Fel and a great conclusion to Unification... your right it does need some spell checking and proofing... But it was a great conclusion!

Keep up the great work... are you sure you can't be pursauded to lovingly craft the next two Karinne books first? :mrgreen:
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Congrats on another excellent book in the life of the Karrines. I love your writing and want to express my admiration for your diligence and imagination. I have been reading SF for over 50 years, from the greats like Asimov, Clark and Norman....I do believe you are reaching for their stars.

Keep it up. :D
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Thanks for the conclusion. I only wish I had time to read it right now! :wink:
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To put it short, Wow just ... wow! :shock:

Take some well earned rest and we will see you when u are up for the next story/chapter .
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Wow! Now this is really something!! On my way to re-reading the whole story just to get it all in context. However clearly Fel is a notch above all the SF fiction writers I have read before.

Thanks Fel.
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I still find it funny when Fel refers to a 200,000 word novel as a short story!
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Thanks Fel, another great story. Oh but you are evil. thanks again.
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Yay!

And, yes, a 200,000 word story is a short story... For Fel.

Me, I'm in the midst of rereading Subjugation as a result of waiting for this chapter, Unification is short!

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200,000 words? That's not a novel. That's a freakin prologue.
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A prologue?

if that is a prologue what is a novel??
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Very good story, love all your stories except kit. You'r one of my favorite author.
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just love the story.
So when is the next one????
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padfoot wrote:Very good story, love all your stories except kit. You'r one of my favorite author.
except kit?!?

Padfoot? Let's see. Yep, right there next to... Mizriath!

Although, arguably, other than being anthropomorphic/furry, the Kit Saga is a standard category romance novel, unlike Fel's other works which are clearly SF/F epic tales of conflict and societal change, and it is legit to not be into romance novels.

I guess.
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kd7mvs wrote:
padfoot wrote:Very good story, love all your stories except kit. You'r one of my favorite author.
except kit?!?

Padfoot? Let's see. Yep, right there next to... Mizriath!

Although, arguably, other than being anthropomorphic/furry, the Kit Saga is a standard category romance novel, unlike Fel's other works which are clearly SF/F epic tales of conflict and societal change, and it is legit to not be into romance novels.

I guess.
If you recall, when I started it, I warned that not everyone would like it...so it's just fine for people not to like it. Can't please everyone all the time.

And as long as he enjoys just ONE story I've written, how can I be upset? :)
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I enjoy all of your stories, so can i have another please!!!???

Is it done yet? Probably not, but I don't have anything better to do! Is it done yet? Probably not, but I don't have anything better to do!.. ah heck, its the day before thanksgiving... I'll give you a break.... till friday. :twisted:
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New books! Yay! let the nagging begin! Is it done yet? Probably not, but I don't have anything better to do! Is it done yet? Probably not, but I don't have anything better to do!...

True, I really have nothing better to do in my free time, I mean, what could be better than reading Fel's stories or being messed with by Spec? Thanks for the fun spec!
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