And I drag out the story by yet another chapter filled with inane dialogue instead of plot movement!
At this rate, it'll end around chapter 39.
That, or just kill everyone in a tragic plane crash en route to Boston after the wedding.
....
Dammit, I just gave away the plot!
Where is that damn edit button?
chapter 16
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Re: chapter 16
Thanks Fel,
Can't wait to get home to read it.
Can't wait to get home to read it.
"Any man who can hitch the length and breadth of the galaxy, rough it, slum it, struggle against terrible odds, win through, and still knows where his towel is is clearly a man to be reckoned with."
Re: chapter 16
Whoot 
thanks fel.
thanks fel.Re: chapter 16
Thanks, Fel! Airplane reading tomorrow!
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WOOT!! The new chapter is out early! Thanks, Fel! 
39 chapters? I've just died and gone to heaven.
Nicolai
39 chapters? I've just died and gone to heaven.
Nicolai
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rabidly promoted by an unscrupulous mainstream media, which holds forth the
proposition that it is entirely possible to pick up a turd by the clean end."
"A doctrine fostered by a delusional, illogical, liberal minority, and
rabidly promoted by an unscrupulous mainstream media, which holds forth the
proposition that it is entirely possible to pick up a turd by the clean end."
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Re: chapter 16
Great Chapter Fel! I gotta say the part with the nuclear submarine was just... WOW! I never saw it coming.
"Any man who can hitch the length and breadth of the galaxy, rough it, slum it, struggle against terrible odds, win through, and still knows where his towel is is clearly a man to be reckoned with."
Re: chapter 16
thanks, and that does clear up quite a few things that were bothering me.
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thanks buuuuuuddy ooowwwwuuuuu uuhh squezze tha juuice
God made pot, man made booze, who do trust, what would you choose
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can't wait to have all the 39 chapter m8
great, thanks
ham
great, thanks
ham
Re: chapter 16
Another great one Fel, as if you produced anything else?
Anyway I'm looking forward to it.
As for the inane dialogue, I don't think anyone will complain about it. Sometimes those are the best parts, at least I think it can be. Makes the characters feel more real, because life isn't just all the important parts its the little things. So whats up for the next chapter a play by play on Kit and Jessie's sleepless and nerve filled night before the wedding?Fel wrote:And I drag out the story by yet another chapter filled with inane dialogue instead of plot movement!
At this rate, it'll end around chapter 39.
Anyway I'm looking forward to it."I can control my destiny, but not my fate. Destiny means there are opportunities to turn right or left, but fate is a one-way street. I believe we all have the choice as to whether we fulfil our destiny, but our fate is sealed."
--Paulo Coelho
--Paulo Coelho
Re: chapter 16
"Inane dialogue"?!?!?!?!? Where? Seemed pretty god to me.
Hey, This story still has lots of life. I am sure you can make chapter 139!
Thanks again FEL.
crxbnt
Hey, This story still has lots of life. I am sure you can make chapter 139!
Thanks again FEL.
crxbnt
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Re: chapter 16
Dude, spoilers are not good. Especially, say, if an admin has been away and completely missed two chapters!crxbnt wrote:"Inane dialogue"?!?!?!?!? Where? Seemed pretty god to me. Loved to see...