Chapter 15.

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Re: Chapter 15.

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Thanks Fel, So Far loving it. :D
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Re: Chapter 15.

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I just want to know...how long did it take to write:

“Does it make it hotter to know I know you were looking, or did you think it was hotter thinking you were peeking when I didn’t know you were there?”

so that it made some semblance of sense. It took me three times reading for me to understand.
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Re: Chapter 15.

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What, did I leave my participle dangling? Oh my. Excuse me.

*zip*
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Re: Chapter 15.

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Fel wrote:What, did I leave my participle dangling? Oh my. Excuse me.

*zip*
Wow :shock: that was alittle bit more of Fel then I ever wanted to see. I think I'm jealous, to be able to write a sentence that complicated with you participle dangling is impressive. And geez, what a participle it is too. :oops:
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thanks fel!

plots within plots within plots....

classic fair from our awesome wordsmith!
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Fel wrote:What, did I leave my participle dangling? Oh my. Excuse me.

*zip*
He He He

Partical man,
Partical man,
Doin' the things a partical can.
What's he like, it's not important,
Partical man.
Is he dot, or is he a spec?
When he's under water does he get wet?
Or does the water get him instead?
Nobody knows, Partical man.

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And in the fury of this darkest hour
I will be your light
A lifetime for this destiny
For I am Winter born
And in this moment..I will not run
It is my place to stand
We few shall carry hope
Within our bloodied hands
(bloodied hands)
And in our Dying, we're more alive-than we have ever been
I've lived for these few seconds
For I am Winter born
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