About a quarter of this is the original writing, and the rest is my rework. But since it is rework, I was able to get it banged out rather quickly.
Now you get to meet Fox, Karra, Saja, and Aeyalla. I think you'll like them.
But, to warn everyone now: from here out, it will all be original content, as I'd like to rewrite it now that I'm a better writer. I was a rank amateur when I wrote this the first time, and it...bad. And since I start school back on Monday and will be VERY busy, you might see a long drought before I release anything else, no matter what it is.
I know it's rather evil to have this out, and chapter 1 of Legacy out as well, and then claim I won't have time to do much work on them...but I must keep my evil in peak physical condition.
WARNING: I didn't spellcheck or proofread this in any way whatsoever. This is the raw writing, right off the farm, unpasteurized. So if you find any mistakes, just ignore them, I'll fix them later.
Spoilers Discussion over in the Spoilers Thread, please.
