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by Fel
Fri Sep 20, 2019 4:11 am
Forum: Subjugation Universe
Topic: Citadel Online
Replies: 6
Views: 342

Re: Citadel Online

Yeah, after all the proofreading and editing, I was so burned out I didn't feel like spending another hour running spellcheck on all 9 chapters.

Yall have to live with my laziness.
by Fel
Fri Sep 20, 2019 3:11 am
Forum: Subjugation Universe
Topic: Citadel Online
Replies: 6
Views: 342

Re: Citadel Online

Glad you liked it. I'm still not sure I edited it correctly though. In the original version, Xen gets Touched by the Djinn off the sea giant prince, but then I realized he couldn't possibly get skilled enough in using it by the end of the Grand Crusade to make the battle at Freeport work. So, I gave...
by Fel
Wed Sep 18, 2019 10:52 am
Forum: Short Stories
Topic: Citadel Online.
Replies: 18
Views: 1557

Citadel Online.

I think I fixed everything...at least I hope I did. But to warn you now, after doing all that proofreading, I didn't run spellchecker on any chapter. I was too annoyed. So endure the typos. ;) Mind that this story is not over. It just catches up to the point in Revolution that it needs to be so the ...
by Fel
Tue Sep 17, 2019 8:29 pm
Forum: General Discussion
Topic: Updatish II.
Replies: 13
Views: 1444

Re: Updatish II.

I MIGHT have the short story done and posted tomorrow (18 Sep). I have it done, but I've found a lot of continuity errors in the first chapter due to the major edits I made to it. I'll have to more or less read the entire thing carefully to proofread it and make sure I caught them all. It runs 9 cha...
by Fel
Mon Sep 09, 2019 10:52 am
Forum: General Discussion
Topic: Updatish II.
Replies: 13
Views: 1444

Updatish II.

I should have a LOT to put up in a one or two weeks. Last chapter, I introduced Kevin Ball and what he's doing over in the game, and this chapter of Revolution will reveal the end of the Grand Crusade and what happens during and after the final battle. I don't want to spoil that ending in Revolution...
by Fel
Sun Sep 01, 2019 3:30 am
Forum: General Discussion
Topic: Update?
Replies: 37
Views: 4864

Re: Update?

Fel, How about you Doctor visit, were you spot on? Not quite. They're going to run a nerve conductivity test to find out why I'm experiencing partial numbness in the big toe on the leg I injured. Outside of that, more or less. The doctor said my leg won't be completely healed for another month, in ...
by Fel
Tue Aug 27, 2019 11:46 am
Forum: General Discussion
Topic: Update?
Replies: 37
Views: 4864

Re: Update?

I'm about 90% healed. I can walk again without limping, but I still have some very mild lingering pain in the leg. And I seem to have an issue with walking down stairs or down a hill, but not UP. I guess it puts extra strain on the ligament for me to lean back and bend my leg that way. I have a sche...
by Fel
Thu Aug 15, 2019 12:29 pm
Forum: Subjugation
Topic: Revolution, Chapter 6.
Replies: 33
Views: 3376

Revolution, Chapter 6.

Enjoy.
by Fel
Wed Aug 07, 2019 9:45 pm
Forum: Subjugation Universe
Topic: Revolution, chapter 5 (spoilers)
Replies: 15
Views: 1092

Re: Revolution, chapter 5 (spoilers)

I was also wondering how come that guy got a jack installed if he is so faey phobic and that almost all doctors at the Imperial medical service at terra are faey. Also how is he able to work at a faey company ? Where he works only has a few Faey executives working there, the vast majority of the em...
by Fel
Wed Aug 07, 2019 3:08 pm
Forum: Subjugation Universe
Topic: Revolution, chapter 5 (spoilers)
Replies: 15
Views: 1092

Re: Revolution, chapter 5 (spoilers)

I was also wondering how come that guy got a jack installed if he is so faey phobic and that almost all doctors at the Imperial medical service at terra are faey. Also how is he able to work at a faey company ? Where he works only has a few Faey executives working there, the vast majority of the em...
by Fel
Mon Aug 05, 2019 12:21 pm
Forum: Subjugation
Topic: Revolution, Chapter 5.
Replies: 24
Views: 2561

Revolution, Chapter 5.

I can't remember if I spellchecked it or not. So if you see any typos, that means I forgot.

Enjoy.
by Fel
Mon Jul 29, 2019 3:10 pm
Forum: General Discussion
Topic: Update?
Replies: 37
Views: 4864

Re: Update?

Chapter 5 is theoretically done, but I haven't released it yet because of something in chapter 6. If I have to retcon, I don't want to have to go back and edit a released chapter and confuse people. It's been slow going regardless. I severely strained the anterior infererior somethingorother ligamen...
by Fel
Tue Jul 09, 2019 4:47 am
Forum: Subjugation Universe
Topic: Revolution Ch 4 (SPOILERS)
Replies: 19
Views: 2150

Re: Revolution Ch 4 (SPOILERS)

So three years, A lot can happen in 3 years, Jason could finish his fleet building program, the kids would be teenagers, he might even have finished refitting some moon superships. Yes, the fleet expansion plan is done, at least with the ships. They're having trouble scraping together crews for all...
by Fel
Sun Jul 07, 2019 2:15 pm
Forum: Subjugation Universe
Topic: Revolution Ch 4 (SPOILERS)
Replies: 19
Views: 2150

Re: Revolution Ch 4 (SPOILERS)

I think we are going to get a time skip of a decade or so as fel wrote that Jason doesn't feel any thing major coming up. I think the next issue is going to flare up when the Coalition either discovers the ftl light drive and are attacked for it by any of the other milky way empires. There will be ...
by Fel
Sun Jul 07, 2019 3:57 am
Forum: Subjugation Universe
Topic: Revolution Ch 4 (SPOILERS)
Replies: 19
Views: 2150

Re: Revolution Ch 4 (SPOILERS)

Simple. If other civilizations found out what Karinne ships could do, they'd hunt them down to capture them for the drives.

To prevent fighting endless wars with every spacefaring race they come across, they hide the fact they're from another galaxy.