Familiar, Chapter 2.
Familiar, Chapter 2.
Writing this helped me get back on track with Revelation, so give it props even if you don't like it.
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Just another guy from the shallow end of the gene pool.
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Re: Familiar, Chapter 2.
thanks Fel!!
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I appreciate all your writing.
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Re: Familiar, Chapter 2.
Thanks Fel!
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Some just don't have any film!
Some just don't have any film!
Re: Familiar, Chapter 2.
I feel like this is Fel creating yet another magic system and world, and hence the first two chapters have a LOT of exposition
Standard Fel hahah.
I will admit I skimmed some of it, but as always I DO love the worlds you create
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I will admit I skimmed some of it, but as always I DO love the worlds you create
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Thanks for an awesome chapter!
I guess i may be one of the few or the only one but i would not be mad to have this one move to a main story. I am wishing for new chapters and that is very rare in this crazy day and age.
I guess i may be one of the few or the only one but i would not be mad to have this one move to a main story. I am wishing for new chapters and that is very rare in this crazy day and age.
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Re: Familiar, Chapter 2.
I would be good with a 2 to 1 chapter ratio favoring this story over the Subjugation series. Not saying I don't like Subjugation, just would like to see where this one goes more at the moment.
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I vote 1:1 or 2:1 in favor of Revelation series just want to make sure that gets finished as it’s one of my two favorite universes you have built.
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- Katzh-dashi
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Re: Familiar, Chapter 2.
Thank you Fel. Glad things are moving in a positive direction.
"Let's be Very Careful out there people!"
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Thank you for another chapter, after the first one I was a little curious, but after this one I can’t wait to read more of this series!