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Re: Revelation, Chapter 11.
Posted: Sun Dec 11, 2022 9:20 pm
by wetnomad
Many thanks for the early xmas prezzie Fel.
Re: Revelation, Chapter 11.
Posted: Sun Dec 11, 2022 9:20 pm
by NegativeEnergy
Thank you for early Xmas present.
Re: Revelation, Chapter 11.
Posted: Sun Dec 11, 2022 10:22 pm
by khyranleander
Thanks, Fel
Re: Revelation, Chapter 11.
Posted: Mon Dec 12, 2022 2:30 am
by Lochar
No issues with swapping over between old and new laptop. And a very nice lead-in to the next big thing mixed in with a fun glimpse of the world.
Re: Revelation, Chapter 11.
Posted: Mon Dec 12, 2022 3:11 am
by pjoug
Thanks FEL
Re: Revelation, Chapter 11.
Posted: Mon Dec 12, 2022 9:56 pm
by adriapirat
Thank you FEL
Re: Revelation, Chapter 11.
Posted: Tue Dec 13, 2022 3:34 am
by konman
Thanks Fel!
Re: Revelation, Chapter 11.
Posted: Wed Dec 14, 2022 6:37 pm
by khyranleander
Took me a couple days before had a chance to read this. Very cool, both in itself and because the new plot aspect is vaguely akin to one of my all-time favorite (and unfinished) stories, David R Palmer's Threshold.
It really is a VAGUE tie: similar start with a Terran exposed to an advanced race of aliens, and an overarching foe *kinda* like the one you just introduced, but the overlap pretty much ends there (his hero actually turns himself into a kind of dragon at one point!). Still, it'd add a comforting sense of closure to see how you end up resolving the end conflict he never got around to directly addressing. So extra thanks for that!
Re: Revelation, Chapter 11.
Posted: Thu Dec 15, 2022 8:25 am
by mjkj
Thank you, Fel
Re: Revelation, Chapter 11.
Posted: Fri Dec 16, 2022 7:16 pm
by Rakarath
Cheers Fel !
Re: Revelation, Chapter 11.
Posted: Wed Dec 21, 2022 4:02 pm
by Seanot
Thank you for the new chapter!
Re: Revelation, Chapter 11.
Posted: Sun Dec 25, 2022 2:31 pm
by betatester
Thank you Fel, been late to the party but still nice Christmas gift
Re: Revelation, Chapter 11.
Posted: Wed Dec 28, 2022 5:01 pm
by zooplbr
Beautiful....
Re: Revelation, Chapter 11.
Posted: Fri Jan 06, 2023 7:41 am
by XavDan
Thanks for the chapter.Good companion over the holidays
Re: Revelation, Chapter 11.
Posted: Wed Jan 11, 2023 5:48 pm
by OldGrumpInTraining
I already thanked you Fel, but I must say that this chapter is one of the most enjoyable that I can remember.
Maybe not the best, but the most enjoyable