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Revelation, Chapter 11.

Posted: Sun Dec 11, 2022 2:04 am
by Fel
Here it is.

If anyone finds any problems with the chapter, lemme know. It was saved half on the old laptop and half on the new one. If there were any issues with it being saved across two different Word versions, I need to know.

Sorry it took so long.

Enjoy.

Re: Revelation, Chapter 11.

Posted: Sun Dec 11, 2022 2:17 am
by kal
nice! thanks a ton!

Re: Revelation, Chapter 11.

Posted: Sun Dec 11, 2022 2:58 am
by bherrm
Thanks!

Re: Revelation, Chapter 11.

Posted: Sun Dec 11, 2022 3:29 am
by spinner707
Awesome. Can’t wait to read, Fel. Thanks as always!!!

Re: Revelation, Chapter 11.

Posted: Sun Dec 11, 2022 3:43 am
by kyli
Thanks!!!

Re: Revelation, Chapter 11.

Posted: Sun Dec 11, 2022 3:56 am
by OldGrumpInTraining
Thank you Good Sir, for this chapter and all the previous chapters in your tales.

Re: Revelation, Chapter 11.

Posted: Sun Dec 11, 2022 4:19 am
by calista241
Awesome! TY Fel!

Re: Revelation, Chapter 11.

Posted: Sun Dec 11, 2022 4:42 am
by Taliesin
Awesome!

Thank you Fel

Re: Revelation, Chapter 11.

Posted: Sun Dec 11, 2022 6:36 am
by Wolfee
Thx Fel!!

Re: Revelation, Chapter 11.

Posted: Sun Dec 11, 2022 11:44 am
by Mladen
Thank you very much Fel.

Re: Revelation, Chapter 11.

Posted: Sun Dec 11, 2022 1:54 pm
by expedient
Thank Fel :mrgreen:

Re: Revelation, Chapter 11.

Posted: Sun Dec 11, 2022 2:35 pm
by Fel
And yeah, already found an editing error. I thought I deleted those two paragraphs, it must not have taken or something.

It's nothing major, you guys just get to see that I changed Estrella's dance scene from something passive to something active.

I'll chalk that up to moving to the new laptop. I didn't read the chapter to proofread it this time, I was too busy tinkering with Word.

Re: Revelation, Chapter 11.

Posted: Sun Dec 11, 2022 2:59 pm
by felfan3000
Oh joy! Christmas came early!

Thanks Fel!

Re: Revelation, Chapter 11.

Posted: Sun Dec 11, 2022 5:18 pm
by Blacktiger
felfan3000 wrote: Sun Dec 11, 2022 2:59 pm Oh joy! Christmas came early!

Thanks Fel!
Indeed, it has ! Thank you Fel for being such an awesome storyteller all these many years now. I wish you and everybody else on this board a very mery xmas and a happy new year

Re: Revelation, Chapter 11.

Posted: Sun Dec 11, 2022 7:34 pm
by scooter012
Thanks Fel!!