Citadel Online.

Miscelanious Short Stories
Sancria
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Re: Citadel Online.

Post by Sancria » Fri Oct 04, 2019 4:43 pm

I have only one quibble. How is this a short story? I mean a Novella sure, but it has 9 chapters!
I'd gladly travel back in time, except I would have to wait longer for the next chapter of Fel's work...sorry, pass.

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Re: Citadel Online.

Post by Cronus1585 » Mon Oct 07, 2019 3:32 am

This was so amazing. Would love for this story line to continue!

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Re: Citadel Online.

Post by crxbnt » Mon Oct 07, 2019 10:30 pm

Thanks FEL! Silly me let RL get in the way for a bit and look what I missed!

Oh well, I have something to enjoy now.

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Re: Citadel Online.

Post by bluemax65 » Wed Oct 09, 2019 4:58 pm

Is this part of the Subjugation "universe" or a separate/different story?

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Re: Citadel Online.

Post by Chasm » Wed Oct 09, 2019 6:21 pm

Part of it.
Telling and much expanding some backstory used in Subjugation from a new POV.

I'd say Subjugation makes sense without it but publishing this short story between chapters 6 and 7 makes much sense since it slots in there.

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Re: Citadel Online.

Post by bluemax65 » Mon Oct 14, 2019 12:22 pm

Chasm wrote:
Wed Oct 09, 2019 6:21 pm
Part of it.
Telling and much expanding some backstory used in Subjugation from a new POV.

I'd say Subjugation makes sense without it but publishing this short story between chapters 6 and 7 makes much sense since it slots in there.
Thank you.

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Re: Citadel Online.

Post by bluemax65 » Tue Oct 15, 2019 12:29 pm

bluemax65 wrote:
Mon Oct 14, 2019 12:22 pm
Chasm wrote:
Wed Oct 09, 2019 6:21 pm
Part of it.
Telling and much expanding some backstory used in Subjugation from a new POV.

I'd say Subjugation makes sense without it but publishing this short story between chapters 6 and 7 makes much sense since it slots in there.
Thank you.
Sorry, just to be clear. This story fits in between Inception and Conviction. Right?

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Re: Citadel Online.

Post by Wolfee » Tue Oct 15, 2019 1:40 pm

bluemax65 wrote:
Tue Oct 15, 2019 12:29 pm
bluemax65 wrote:
Mon Oct 14, 2019 12:22 pm
Chasm wrote:
Wed Oct 09, 2019 6:21 pm
Part of it.
Telling and much expanding some backstory used in Subjugation from a new POV.

I'd say Subjugation makes sense without it but publishing this short story between chapters 6 and 7 makes much sense since it slots in there.
Thank you.
Sorry, just to be clear. This story fits in between Inception and Conviction. Right?

Fel posted it between chapter 6 and 7 of Revelation. That is where the storylines converge.

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Re: Citadel Online.

Post by bluemax65 » Wed Oct 16, 2019 1:09 am

Thank you.

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