Updatish II.
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Updatish II.
I should have a LOT to put up in a one or two weeks.
Last chapter, I introduced Kevin Ball and what he's doing over in the game, and this chapter of Revolution will reveal the end of the Grand Crusade and what happens during and after the final battle.
I don't want to spoil that ending in Revolution. I want Kevin's story to reveal that ending.
So, over the last couple of weeks or so, I've been busting my tail working on Kevin's story, and once I finish it up to a certain point, I'm going to release both the next chapter of Revolution and 7-8 chapters of the short story about Kevin, CO, and what happens to him.
I didn't write ALL of it over the last few days. I've actually been writing it for the last couple of months, just half a page here and a page there, when I'm not working on Revolution. I needed to so I had complete continuity between the two stories once Jason met Kevin, so I knew exactly where they were, what had happened, and the little details like Kevin's war with Rita before they became friends would match up with the other story. I've also had to do some major edits to it, because I changed some very important elements of the story to make Kevin look sufficiently like a badass with powerful and unique abilities befitting someone that does what he does, but not making him a Mary Sue.
So yeah, it's been a bit of a content drought. But when I'm ready to release everything, you're gonna get a TON of stuff to read.
Last chapter, I introduced Kevin Ball and what he's doing over in the game, and this chapter of Revolution will reveal the end of the Grand Crusade and what happens during and after the final battle.
I don't want to spoil that ending in Revolution. I want Kevin's story to reveal that ending.
So, over the last couple of weeks or so, I've been busting my tail working on Kevin's story, and once I finish it up to a certain point, I'm going to release both the next chapter of Revolution and 7-8 chapters of the short story about Kevin, CO, and what happens to him.
I didn't write ALL of it over the last few days. I've actually been writing it for the last couple of months, just half a page here and a page there, when I'm not working on Revolution. I needed to so I had complete continuity between the two stories once Jason met Kevin, so I knew exactly where they were, what had happened, and the little details like Kevin's war with Rita before they became friends would match up with the other story. I've also had to do some major edits to it, because I changed some very important elements of the story to make Kevin look sufficiently like a badass with powerful and unique abilities befitting someone that does what he does, but not making him a Mary Sue.
So yeah, it's been a bit of a content drought. But when I'm ready to release everything, you're gonna get a TON of stuff to read.
Just another guy from the shallow end of the gene pool.
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Thanks Fel update!!! Also, how did the nerve testing go?
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7-8 chapters...... COOL!
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7-8 chapters... Maybe I should plan to have 1 or 2 days off...
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Simply...Awesome!Fel wrote: ↑Mon Sep 09, 2019 10:52 am I should have a LOT to put up in a one or two weeks.
Last chapter, I introduced Kevin Ball and what he's doing over in the game, and this chapter of Revolution will reveal the end of the Grand Crusade and what happens during and after the final battle.
I don't want to spoil that ending in Revolution. I want Kevin's story to reveal that ending.
So, over the last couple of weeks or so, I've been busting my tail working on Kevin's story, and once I finish it up to a certain point, I'm going to release both the next chapter of Revolution and 7-8 chapters of the short story about Kevin, CO, and what happens to him.
I didn't write ALL of it over the last few days. I've actually been writing it for the last couple of months, just half a page here and a page there, when I'm not working on Revolution. I needed to so I had complete continuity between the two stories once Jason met Kevin, so I knew exactly where they were, what had happened, and the little details like Kevin's war with Rita before they became friends would match up with the other story. I've also had to do some major edits to it, because I changed some very important elements of the story to make Kevin look sufficiently like a badass with powerful and unique abilities befitting someone that does what he does, but not making him a Mary Sue.
So yeah, it's been a bit of a content drought. But when I'm ready to release everything, you're gonna get a TON of stuff to read.
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Sounds really great thanks Fel.
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Fel,
Bring it on when your ready! And thanks for you do for us.
Bring it on when your ready! And thanks for you do for us.
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That's just fine!
More importantly how did the EMG go? any news re: nerve damage?
More importantly how did the EMG go? any news re: nerve damage?
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I must say, I got all excited when I first saw this because I misread it as Kyven...
From what I'm seeing about Kevin, I'm still excited.
From what I'm seeing about Kevin, I'm still excited.
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I MIGHT have the short story done and posted tomorrow (18 Sep). I have it done, but I've found a lot of continuity errors in the first chapter due to the major edits I made to it. I'll have to more or less read the entire thing carefully to proofread it and make sure I caught them all.
It runs 9 chapters, so it's going to take several hours to complete.
I won't have the next chapter of Revolution done, however. You'll only be getting the short story.
When I post it, it will go in the Short Stories forum. Watch for it there.
It runs 9 chapters, so it's going to take several hours to complete.
I won't have the next chapter of Revolution done, however. You'll only be getting the short story.
When I post it, it will go in the Short Stories forum. Watch for it there.
Just another guy from the shallow end of the gene pool.
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no worries, take your time
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FIRST! Also, sounds good Fel. We can wait if/when needs be.
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Hi Fel
Thanks for the update... looking forward to the new story. Just in time to get the mid-week hump...
Thanks for the update... looking forward to the new story. Just in time to get the mid-week hump...
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Just finished reading all 9 chapters. You will continue it, yes?