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Re: Retribution, Chapter 11.

Posted: Fri Jul 20, 2018 4:08 pm
by expedient
Thanks Fel :mrgreen:

Re: Retribution, Chapter 11.

Posted: Fri Jul 20, 2018 4:35 pm
by GotToGo
Damn, I checked after 9:00 PM last night looking for something to read and must of missed the post by minutes! Decided to he a go to bed. Got up this morning had my coffee fix and hit the Honey-Do Jar and got to few done, but if I'd known the new chapter was up it would've been damned the Honney-Do Jar, Ha!


And Fel, I did see the dangling sentence and knew something get messed up and was going to notify you, but saw you already know, so waiting for the repost tonight, and thank you.

Re: Retribution, Chapter 11.

Posted: Fri Jul 20, 2018 4:38 pm
by Balaji1976
Thanks fel

Re: Retribution, Chapter 11.

Posted: Fri Jul 20, 2018 5:36 pm
by zooplbr
YES!!! Thanks Fel!

Re: Retribution, Chapter 11.

Posted: Sat Jul 21, 2018 2:42 am
by scooter012
Thanks Fel
just what I needed for the weekend

Re: Retribution, Chapter 11.

Posted: Sat Jul 21, 2018 3:01 am
by GotToGo
Fel,

How do we known when corrected chapter is posted?

Thanks in advance.

Re: Retribution, Chapter 11.

Posted: Sun Jul 22, 2018 12:22 am
by bluemax65
Thank you.

Re: Retribution, Chapter 11.

Posted: Sun Jul 22, 2018 5:49 am
by Fel
GotToGo wrote: Sat Jul 21, 2018 3:01 am Fel,

How do we known when corrected chapter is posted?

Thanks in advance.
When I get power back, I'll have the chance to post it. I haven't had power for two days now thanks to a pretty violent thunderstorm.

The correction only adds about 80 words, so you're not missing much. ;)

Re: Retribution, Chapter 11.

Posted: Mon Jul 23, 2018 12:45 am
by Cougar2k2
Thanks a ton Fel!

Re: Retribution, Chapter 11.

Posted: Mon Jul 23, 2018 7:46 pm
by Rakarath
Many Thanks Fel !

Re: Retribution, Chapter 11.

Posted: Mon Jul 23, 2018 11:31 pm
by Mari
Thank you Fel,
This is bone jarring and powerful

Re: Retribution, Chapter 11.

Posted: Tue Jul 24, 2018 3:50 am
by Kacoo
Awesome, Thanks fel.

Re: Retribution, Chapter 11.

Posted: Tue Jul 24, 2018 11:47 pm
by GotToGo
Fel wrote: Sun Jul 22, 2018 5:49 am
GotToGo wrote: Sat Jul 21, 2018 3:01 am Fel,

How do we known when corrected chapter is posted?

Thanks in advance.
When I get power back, I'll have the chance to post it. I haven't had power for two days now thanks to a pretty violent thunderstorm.

The correction only adds about 80 words, so you're not missing much. ;)

Did you get your home power back up yet? If so, reposted dropped parts of the chapter? Also, have you heard or found you haved Zaa in two locations in one paragraph?


Great chapter by the way and I hope I don't sound like I'm complaining! Love all you do for us.

Re: Retribution, Chapter 11.

Posted: Wed Jul 25, 2018 7:51 am
by PhilippeO
Thanks, Fel

Re: Retribution, Chapter 11.

Posted: Wed Jul 25, 2018 3:19 pm
by mjkj
Thank you, Fel :)