And the buzzer sounds - Ennnnnnhhhhhhhhhhhhhh - (no please, he's doing just fine as he is ...)heustess wrote:If you need to spice the story up, you can easily have Shen jump a shark.
Spelldancer, Chapter 1.
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Thanks Fel -that was a pleasant way to spend a little time - just suspend disbelief and let my imagination of the scene carry me to one of your universes for a short while.
K Pelle aka GBLW
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Many thanks Fel.
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Thank you, Fel
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This'll be interesting. Thanks for the chapter Fel!
"I can control my destiny, but not my fate. Destiny means there are opportunities to turn right or left, but fate is a one-way street. I believe we all have the choice as to whether we fulfil our destiny, but our fate is sealed."
--Paulo Coelho
--Paulo Coelho
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Most excellently done!!!!!!!!!! Can hardly wait for more!!!!!!!!!!!!
Thanks much,
TJ
Thanks much,
TJ
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Thanks
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Thanks Fe!!
We don't mind doing the spell check.
We don't mind doing the spell check.
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This is awesome. I don't think I've read a better intro chapter before, and that includes works from Robert Jordan, Brandon Sanderson, and others.
Bravo Fel. Really, really good work.
Bravo Fel. Really, really good work.
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Great first chapter would love to see more of this world.
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Wow. Incredible introduction. Glad you decided to write this one even though the Subjugation series is my all time favorite story. Keep writing what you enjoy.
“Two possibilities exist: either we are alone in the Universe or we are not. Both are equally terrifying.”
― Arthur C. Clarke
― Arthur C. Clarke
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Thanks! Keep those chapters coming.
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Another great chapter. Thanks Fel!
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Thanks Fel. Awesome as usual. I think I speak for everyone when I say we highly appreciate your efforts.
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Oh my word Fell thanks for this. I have been reading your work since 2006 and I can honestly say you are like a fine wine you just get better with age. First chapter is looking good it is a good base to start off. Just have fun writing it!
Ships were never meant to stay in the Harbour.
They where meant for the the deep ocean waters.
They where created out of Hope, We where created out of Hope.
They where meant for the the deep ocean waters.
They where created out of Hope, We where created out of Hope.
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Thanks Fel. Great start!!