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Here is the next chapter (hey, it only took a couple of years) - it took a little longer than I expected, but in the last little while I found a new 'fact checker' who convinced me to go through the whole story and fix a few details. Well truthfully he discovered names, words, references and other details that needed to be corrected - In fact I even used two different names for two different characters at one point or another. Altogether I'd say about 10% of the story has been changed slightly, but the characters haven't changed, nor has the plot - it's still a tale about a kid who has a few special abilities that he has to learn how to handle. While doing that he has to hide some of those abilities while trying to live a relatively normal life as a budding athlete.

K Pelle

Great work m8
really love reading it,
thanks

ham

Great, I now know what I'll be doing at work today!
Thanks for the Chapter, I've been hoping for a long time that you'd be able to get back to this story.
Once the summer is over, and I actually have time on my hands I fully plan on working my way through you other books too, so you'll have one less inactive account on your yahoo site.

Thanks. Good chapter. Whenever, you manage to put out the next one I will be eagerly waiting...

Thank you for posting your story. Looking forward to reading it this weekend.

Thanks for the new chapter. I have recently read the entire story. I found it very enjoyable. I hope your health improves for more updates.

That's good. Sets things up nicely for more to come. I will also be waiting beside the computer for the next installment. Things are going very well.
Thanks for your efforts, you are doing finest kind!

jnw

Thank you
I love your writing style

SUPER! More Thor!
Keep em coming!!!!
I really enjoy your work!
(I especially think "Beyond the Mirror" was excellent.... "Tit for Tat" next???)