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Here's the next chapter - a touch short because after I wrote the last sentence something screamed - STOP.

KP/GBLW

great m8
thanks

ham

very good chaptor man but we need more we must have more



so in the words of the orphan

please sir can i have some more

Thanks
Magnus

Thank you! I tried not to check yesterday, (stumbled across Fel's update) but couldn't resist. Now I am going to go and enjoy.

crxbnt

ahhhh man, what a place to stop a chapter. Just when you know someone that deserves it is about to get their butt kicked.

Really enjoying the story and I appreciate your efforts.

Freethrow

Well, I'm glad folks seem to enjoy it. However right now I'm grumpy because I and three editors all missed an obvious error which appears several times. #$%^@$@*

Oh, well, I'll have to correct it in the next posting I guess.

KP/GBLW

Hahaha, I like the ending.

So where's the next chapter? Huh huh huh?

-DigitalMaestro

GBLW wrote:Here's the next chapter

Thanks for another cool installment.

a touch short because after I wrote the last sentence something screamed - STOP.

I must say it did create dramatic suspense.

Can't wait to get into

crxbnt wrote:Thank you! I tried not to check yesterday, (stumbled across Fel's update) but couldn't resist. Now I am going to go and enjoy.

crxbnt

Which update?

ACK!!

Horrible place to finish!!! You're learning from Fel how to do cliffies aren't you?

Thank you for writing this.
(yes, i finally got of my lazy butt)

furry_wolf2001b wrote:Thank you for writing this.
(yes, i finally got of my lazy butt)

Well, since you're a Svenska, how about checking my use of Swedish in the story. I haven't spoken it since I was a kid and that seems like a century ago. You can just send me an IM if you see anything in my Swedish bits which is badly written. (to be honest, I'm going on old memories and a Swedish to English dictionary for most of it - then I'm working in the English translation where I can, so people who don't speak Swedish aren't completely lost.)

KP/GBLW