Fel wrote:Jasana was the main villain in the story in that she was leading a group of Druids, Sorcerers, and Wizards in the attacks against Wikuna, and the event for which Eron had been born was to be written in as the climax of the story, when Jasana finally met her reckoning...in her own father, when her duplicity was finally uncovered and the katzh-dashi was forced to put a stop to it directly. And the only one that could stop Jasana is Tarrin.
Jasana could have destroyed the world, but the reason Tarrin wasn't told about how it was to come about was because he is the one that pushes her to that point.
It seemed a great idea for a story, but like I said, when I started writing chapter 2 and I introduced Tarrin in a cameo role (he showed up to fix Amara's necklace), it just didn't feel right. And so, I let the story drop, re-engineered the main concept of the story, and applied it to the Walker series.
I guess since it took me some 18 years to write the Sennadar and Pyrosian stories, I just don't have the heart to go back there. It's almost like a holy place now, an inviolate sanctuary whose threshold I must not cross.
I just finished re-reading the Sennadar stories, all of them.
A thought on Legacy. You could make it a short(er) story, and make Amara the primary character with the story being Keritanima's return to sanity. Something in the three to eight chapter range. Limit the old core family to background and cameos. Just bring them in for the reunion when Kerri recovers, and then just as family celebrating.
What you introduced in Legacy needs to be completed, Fel. It really does. I can't stand the thought of Keritanima being left in that state. She's real to me, and it's an abomination to leave her like that.