Re: Shadow Walker, chapter 5.
Posted: Mon Jun 01, 2009 3:38 am
Thanks Fel
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Shadow Walker, chapter 5.
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Re: Shadow Walker, chapter 5.
Posted: Mon Jun 01, 2009 3:39 am
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Re: Shadow Walker, chapter 5.
Posted: Mon Jun 01, 2009 3:50 am
Yet another great chapter, Fel. Keep them coming.
Re: Shadow Walker, chapter 5.
Posted: Mon Jun 01, 2009 6:23 am
you made my day m8
great, thanks
ham
great, thanks
ham
Re: Shadow Walker, chapter 5.
Posted: Mon Jun 01, 2009 9:00 am
Great chapter Fel, Thank you.
Re: Shadow Walker, chapter 5.
Posted: Mon Jun 01, 2009 12:15 pm
Thanks Fel! It has been hard waiting for this.
crxbnt
crxbnt
Re: Shadow Walker, chapter 5.
Posted: Mon Jun 01, 2009 12:55 pm
Thanks Fel!
Re: Shadow Walker, chapter 5.
Posted: Mon Jun 01, 2009 9:50 pm
Hey thanks for the new chapter Fel... much appreciated.
Re: Shadow Walker, chapter 5.
Posted: Tue Jun 02, 2009 2:41 am
You always have a new chapter when i need it most. Thank you.
Re: Shadow Walker, chapter 5.
Posted: Sat Jun 06, 2009 3:59 am
Looking forward to the next chapter. I really enjoy your writing.
Mocha
Mocha
Re: Shadow Walker, chapter 5.
Posted: Tue Jun 16, 2009 6:50 am
Great part, but I found a TINY error.
The sergeant was as effective with his pain stick as he was sadistic. It took a cruel, twisted man to train and practice to bring a man to the brink of passing out with a pain stick over and over, inflicting unspeakable agony, and not either be horrified by it or enjoy it. This man was the kind that enjoyed it. For how long, Kyven had no idea, he was repeatably tormented with a device whose soul function was to make someone feel like they had been cast into Hell.
did you see it? The error is the word "soul." In this case, I believe the word you wanted to use is "sole."
On a slightly off topic question, do you use the microphone to dictate the story or do you type it out?
Keep up the amazing work, you have no idea how pleased I was to see two parts out this week!
The sergeant was as effective with his pain stick as he was sadistic. It took a cruel, twisted man to train and practice to bring a man to the brink of passing out with a pain stick over and over, inflicting unspeakable agony, and not either be horrified by it or enjoy it. This man was the kind that enjoyed it. For how long, Kyven had no idea, he was repeatably tormented with a device whose soul function was to make someone feel like they had been cast into Hell.
did you see it? The error is the word "soul." In this case, I believe the word you wanted to use is "sole."
On a slightly off topic question, do you use the microphone to dictate the story or do you type it out?
Keep up the amazing work, you have no idea how pleased I was to see two parts out this week!