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Re: Kit, chapter 28.

Posted: Sun Dec 07, 2008 11:53 pm
by wildph
michaelsuave wrote:...
Only one question, where did the "Vulcan's" come from? ...
Hello Everyone,

I have uploaded new pdf and odt (openoffice/opendoc) files to my idisk for the kit story with what I consider to be a few safe changes:

Most of the vulcan's in my copy are now vulpans (there's still a vulcan in there, chapter 5, but that one seems legit).

Most of the val's have been changed to vil's.

I've left the vulpine alone, they scare me too much.

XW
http://homepage.mac.com/wildph/

Re: Kit, chapter 28.

Posted: Mon Dec 08, 2008 2:11 am
by dwightkbrowncts
Thanks Fel for a Great Chapter!!
:D :D

Re: Kit, chapter 28.

Posted: Mon Dec 08, 2008 2:36 am
by dellstart
Dittos all the above!

Re: Kit, chapter 28.

Posted: Mon Dec 08, 2008 4:30 am
by boballab
See what happens when Fel watchs Star Trek while writing. At least Jessie didn't come out with a "sorry Capn but she nae have more power" while flying home. :lol:

Re: Kit, chapter 28.

Posted: Mon Dec 08, 2008 2:34 pm
by Fel
The Vulcan thing and some of the other typos are because I had spellchecker issues, as most of you figured out.

I thought I fixed them all, but I guess I was just as forgetful fixing it as I was spellchecking it. ;)

I'll fix it when I get home and probably put up a new download, since it seems that there are quite a few problems in the chapter.

Sheesh, accidentally hitting "replace all" instead of "ignore all" a couple of times while spellchecking can really cause some interesting problems. ;)

Re: Kit, chapter 28.

Posted: Mon Dec 08, 2008 3:42 pm
by Spec8472
Fel wrote:The Vulcan thing and some of the other typos are because I had spellchecker issues, as most of you figured out.

I thought I fixed them all, but I guess I was just as forgetful fixing it as I was spellchecking it. ;)

I'll fix it when I get home and probably put up a new download, since it seems that there are quite a few problems in the chapter.

Sheesh, accidentally hitting "replace all" instead of "ignore all" a couple of times while spellchecking can really cause some interesting problems. ;)
See, I was actually wondering if your twin had written it, or perhaps you were feeling ill. Something didn't feel right about it, more than just typos galore. :P

Re: Kit, chapter 28.

Posted: Mon Dec 08, 2008 4:20 pm
by deane
hey fel thanks for the new chapter yet again.

Re: Kit, chapter 28.

Posted: Tue Dec 09, 2008 12:47 am
by Downdude
Thanks for posting more of kit. After 27 I was wanting some more so I'm glad there is some more chapters to go still. ;)

Re: Kit, chapter 28.

Posted: Tue Dec 09, 2008 1:14 am
by Fel
Spec8472 wrote:
Fel wrote:The Vulcan thing and some of the other typos are because I had spellchecker issues, as most of you figured out.

I thought I fixed them all, but I guess I was just as forgetful fixing it as I was spellchecking it. ;)

I'll fix it when I get home and probably put up a new download, since it seems that there are quite a few problems in the chapter.

Sheesh, accidentally hitting "replace all" instead of "ignore all" a couple of times while spellchecking can really cause some interesting problems. ;)
See, I was actually wondering if your twin had written it, or perhaps you were feeling ill. Something didn't feel right about it, more than just typos galore. :P
Okay, I admit it. I was watching the trailer for the new Star Trek movie while spellchecking.

And really...just one lame Scotty joke with the kind of material I gave you guys? I expect better from my evil minions in training! You have to have STYLE, dammit!

No style, no tinfoil hats!

Re: Kit, chapter 28.

Posted: Tue Dec 09, 2008 2:00 am
by boballab
Fel wrote:Okay, I admit it. I was watching the trailer for the new Star Trek movie while spellchecking.

And really...just one lame Scotty joke with the kind of material I gave you guys? I expect better from my evil minions in training! You have to have STYLE, dammit!

No style, no tinfoil hats!
You already killed off the Khan figure the best we got now is a Harry Mudd equivelant in Uncle Zack.

(now lets see how many scratch their heads and ask who's Harry Mudd?)

Re: Kit, chapter 28.

Posted: Tue Dec 09, 2008 2:07 am
by Fel
*insufferably cute little purring sound*

Re: Kit, chapter 28.

Posted: Tue Dec 09, 2008 3:02 am
by boballab
Fel wrote:*insufferably cute little purring sound*
Just don't let one around Vil, she is definetly the Klingon figure in this story.

Re: Kit, chapter 28.

Posted: Tue Dec 09, 2008 3:43 am
by canisd
Uh, Fel next time you do a find and replace maybe you want to make sure that find whole words option is ticked?
“That’s a Vilid point,” Vil conceded. “I see I have to be in Norfolk on that Monday morning, and I also have an appointment in New Orleans on Monday afternoon for the ceremony at Avondale Shipyards.”
Even then keep up the great work. :D

Re: Kit, chapter 28.

Posted: Tue Dec 09, 2008 10:25 am
by zedd
canisd wrote:Uh, Fel next time you do a find and replace maybe you want to make sure that find whole words option is ticked?
“That’s a Vilid point,” Vil conceded. “I see I have to be in Norfolk on that Monday morning, and I also have an appointment in New Orleans on Monday afternoon for the ceremony at Avondale Shipyards.”
Even then keep up the great work. :D
Vilid is a valid word in this universe. It means it's been validated by Vil :wink:

Re: Kit, chapter 28.

Posted: Tue Dec 09, 2008 12:53 pm
by Weresmilodon
zedd wrote:Vilid is a valid word in this universe. It means it's been Vilidated by Vil :wink:
Fixed.