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THAT STORY (which I will disavow in public)...chapter 2.

Posted: Sat Feb 02, 2008 6:26 pm
by Fel
Eh, kinda forgot to post it, it's been done since last night. If not for the fact I went out of town yesterday afternoon to take a couch up to my uncle's house, I'd be done with chapter 3 as well. ;)

Re: THAT STORY (which I will disavow in public)...chapter 2.

Posted: Sat Feb 02, 2008 6:44 pm
by Metatrone
You "forgot" to post it? Now that's just nasty... :roll:

Re: THAT STORY (which I will disavow in public)...chapter 2.

Posted: Sat Feb 02, 2008 6:45 pm
by Phantom
Fel wrote:Eh, kinda forgot to post it, it's been done since last night. If not for the fact I went out of town yesterday afternoon to take a couch up to my uncle's house, I'd be done with chapter 3 as well. ;)

Oh did you get to play with the Horse's <grin>


Phantom

Re: THAT STORY (which I will disavow in public)...chapter 2.

Posted: Sat Feb 02, 2008 7:03 pm
by gesit
thanks m8
please do remember chapter 3!!

ham

Re: THAT STORY (which I will disavow in public)...chapter 2.

Posted: Sat Feb 02, 2008 7:08 pm
by Fel
Phantom wrote:
Fel wrote:Eh, kinda forgot to post it, it's been done since last night. If not for the fact I went out of town yesterday afternoon to take a couch up to my uncle's house, I'd be done with chapter 3 as well. ;)

Oh did you get to play with the Horse's <grin>


Phantom
Eh, nope.

The uncle who owned the farm retired. He sold the farm and moved to Florida.

Fox's hatred of horses? That's directly off me. Having to care for those horses...BLEH. I hated them, they hated me, and we were all comfortable with that arrangement.

This uncle has some health issues that makes it hard for him to do anything that requires manual labor, but eh, that's what families are for. There's nothing wrong with my back.

Re: THAT STORY (which I will disavow in public)...chapter 2.

Posted: Sat Feb 02, 2008 8:11 pm
by Phantom
Fel wrote:
Phantom wrote:
Fel wrote:Eh, kinda forgot to post it, it's been done since last night. If not for the fact I went out of town yesterday afternoon to take a couch up to my uncle's house, I'd be done with chapter 3 as well. ;)
Oh did you get to play with the Horse's <grin>

Phantom
Eh, nope.

The uncle who owned the farm retired. He sold the farm and moved to Florida.

Fox's hatred of horses? That's directly off me. Having to care for those horses...BLEH. I hated them, they hated me, and we were all comfortable with that arrangement.
Yea you told me about you and your love of those horses several years ago ....Thats why I Just had to tease you about them

Well i have to say now after reading chapter 2 animorphic or not it looks like you have another Hit story started
here.

All though i love your Sci-Fi/Fanasty storys the most this one is getting to be real good too.


Your not going to let this be like that Weber and Ringo Series that shall not be named!
(the Emprie of man/ March series :shock: ) are you now <G> :roll: :wink:


Phantom

Re: THAT STORY (which I will disavow in public)...chapter 2.

Posted: Sat Feb 02, 2008 10:31 pm
by DigitalMaestro
Fel,
This story is only in the second chapter and I'm hooked. You've really hit on an awesome theme: kid from MEGA rich family, just trying to live outside that shadow. Definitely a hit in the making! Just keep writing so we don't have to rally an angry mob of readers on withdrawals! :twisted:

Re: THAT STORY (which I will disavow in public)...chapter 2.

Posted: Sat Feb 02, 2008 10:57 pm
by Metatrone
For some reason chapter two is a lot nicer, bit "fluffy" though.

Re: THAT STORY (which I will disavow in public)...chapter 2.

Posted: Sun Feb 03, 2008 12:27 am
by Hearly
You know Fel, Not that I have much experience dealing with Furry type stories, but with the way it's written, you could be talking about a White rich famliy who's disowned son was interested in a (black, Asian, Hispanic, etc.) girl, is that why people write Furry stories to show racism without calling it that directly?

Re: THAT STORY (which I will disavow in public)...chapter 2.

Posted: Sun Feb 03, 2008 2:06 am
by Phantom
Hearly wrote:You know Fel, Not that I have much experience dealing with Furry type stories, but with the way it's written, you could be talking about a White rich famliy who's disowned son was interested in a (black, Asian, Hispanic, etc.) girl, is that why people write Furry stories to show racism without calling it that directly?
My Fav in the Animorphic Sci-Fi genre is http://www.furlisophical.net/pickseason.htm


Phantom

Re: THAT STORY (which I will disavow in public)...chapter 2.

Posted: Sun Feb 03, 2008 2:56 am
by michaelsuave
I'm really liking this book fel. Heh, with your love of horses, I wonder what a horse furry is going to be like in your world? :wink:

Re: THAT STORY (which I will disavow in public)...chapter 2.

Posted: Sun Feb 03, 2008 3:00 am
by Fel
Either:

1: dead.

2: dying.

3: running through the streets on fire.

4: all of the above.

Re: THAT STORY (which I will disavow in public)...chapter 2.

Posted: Sun Feb 03, 2008 3:18 am
by Lochar
If 1, will they beat beating it?

Re: THAT STORY (which I will disavow in public)...chapter 2.

Posted: Sun Feb 03, 2008 4:41 am
by Spec8472
Hearly wrote:with the way it's written, you could be talking about a White rich famliy who's disowned son was interested in a (black, Asian, Hispanic, etc.) girl, is that why people write Furry stories to show racism without calling it that directly?
Well, you could also look at the basis of Subjugation in a similar light - The Blue skinned folks come from a foreign land, enslave the natives and make them work on farms.

Sometimes a story is just a story.

Re: THAT STORY (which I will disavow in public)...chapter 2.

Posted: Sun Feb 03, 2008 10:18 am
by shades98
Two chapters of two different stories, and now we wait...at least I know it will be a short wait since Fel is mostly done with 3. Thank you for your great stories once again.