THAT STORY (which I will disavow in public)...chapter 2.

SirVal
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Re: THAT STORY (which I will disavow in public)...chapter 2.

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Great story!

I love it so far and it has a lot of potential. Eagerly waiting for chapter 3.
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Re: THAT STORY (which I will disavow in public)...chapter 2.

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OK, post #2 on chapter #2.

KEEP IT UP! 8)

This is a great start, Fel. Just keep it going and you have a hit on your hands.

Coming up (in the next thread) my comments on chapter 3

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"A doctrine fostered by a delusional, illogical, liberal minority, and
rabidly promoted by an unscrupulous mainstream media, which holds forth the
proposition that it is entirely possible to pick up a turd by the clean end."
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