ummm...some as of yet unnamed story, chapter 1.

[wolfy]

hrmmmmm..... No offense but this is definately not my favorite. How about another story of House Karinne or Fox the Wonderer or even Legacy? Was well written but just not me.

[storyreader2005]

This is really interesting Fel and I hope that you don't give up (or that your muse doesn't abandon you, whichever).

[Spec8472]

Eh, that part, I'll admit, I was just kinda making up as I went along, and I guess I reached back into prior works for a little help when I was fleshing out Kit's background. Besides, it made good drama for explaining why he's a history major and he has a bad back.

Experiments are good, and you'll always have an eager audience ready to read whatever you do write. Unless you start doing Pokemon fanfic, if you do that, we're out of here - got it?

[Hearly]

Eh, that part, I'll admit, I was just kinda making up as I went along, and I guess I reached back into prior works for a little help when I was fleshing out Kit's background. Besides, it made good drama for explaining why he's a history major and he has a bad back.

Experiments are good, and you'll always have an eager audience ready to read whatever you do write. Unless you start doing Pokemon fanfic, if you do that, we're out of here - got it?

Um, well I guess it would depend on the FanFic, I mean if it's them dying horribly it might be interesting.... Or maybe SpongeBob dying horribly...

[Fel]

Pika Pika!

Pika...CHUUUUUU!!!!!!!!!!

*ducks*

[Hearly]

Pika Pika!

Pika...CHUUUUUU!!!!!!!!!!

*ducks*

heh, Um, wtf does that mean?

heh Guess I don't watch enough kid shows, but I will be soon, wife gave birth on Sunday, got a 5 day old little baby hanging out now...

[Fel]

It's not too late! Wait for her to get involved with the baby, then RUN LIKE HELL!

Congrats, btw. I hope you don't like to sleep.

Cause you won't be.

[Hearly]

It's not too late! Wait for her to get involved with the baby, then RUN LIKE HELL!

Congrats, btw. I hope you don't like to sleep.

Cause you won't be.

heh Um, they've been home since tuesday, I already know that

[khyranleander]

Looking good, man! You gotta love that background -- so full of potential.

Not sure how pertinent it would be to your story line, but after reading it the words "Fox Paws" leapt at me as a title suggestion. You know, play on the French faux pas, a term we use these days for any social gaffe. (And all his family but his sister think he's a walking mistake.) The use of the pun instead of the actual phrase could also imply a rejection of those blue-blood rules, the furry walking in no shoes but his own: the fox's paws.

Just a thought.
KB

(PS Occurs to me also that it sounds a bit like another pertinent phrase: "f+++ pa!" )

[Phantom]

It's not too late! Wait for her to get involved with the baby, then RUN LIKE HELL!

Congrats, btw. I hope you don't like to sleep.

Cause you won't be.

heh Um, they've been home since tuesday, I already know that

Hehehehehehe Just wait untill the Smell Fairy shows up .....humm i wonder
if Sarraya did that in her spare time.


Phantom

[Fiferguy]

Great start Fel. I'm horrible with names, so I'm no help there. So is this going to be all set in the "real" world, or are there going to be some more fantastic elements? Other than everyone being furry?

[deane]

first time posting but gotta say fel that I love all your writing. keep up the good work.

[nicolai]

Great start, Fel!

How about Fox on the Run as a title? (Got "Band on the Run" stuck in my head right now, so don't throw any bricks.)

I'll be reading the next two chapters in the few minutes, and I'll comment on those appropriately.

Nicolai

[sabre39j]

Grats on the new baby now you can start reading him all of Fel stories at bedtime Put a whole new meaning on the big bad wolf LOL

[darkhand]

Tarrin would be such a bad influence on a child, just think a kid that gets so angry that they blew up the school, I can just see it, "kid wonder uses magic, no more school for you". but just kidding, still he would be such a "bad" influence.