The Fox and the Hawk, Chapter 1 - Spoilers

[montie1123]

Im already loving this, and i cant wait for more hehe. Oh the fun and games and other stuff just waiting for Fel to write it and post it.

[Fel]

in other words, he's jason without technology but with a magical wife i think i'm gonna like this

Not exactly.

Fox was the inspiration for Jason's sense of humor, up to a point, but Fox is actually rather...mean.

Jason has a sense of restraint, because he's actually a very moral person. Fox is not moral in the same way. He doesn't have the same restraint, so he'll go way further than Jason ever would. Fox has killed in his games with people who annoy him, where Jason would never do that.

Think of Fox as a mixtures of Jason's sense of humor, Sarraya's whimsical demeanor, and Keritanima's calculating deliberateness. It's a very scary combination.

[montie1123]

So in other words before winter is over a few people might end up in pain a few maybe dead and alot wishing they were neaver born or that he was never born... hehe i like it

[Metatrone]

Not exactly.

Fox was the inspiration for Jason's sense of humor, up to a point, but Fox is actually rather...mean.

That just makes it better.
So I guess Fel is Jason when he teases with little infos on what is to come in the next chapter, and is Fox when he writes the cliffhangers we all love and hate.

[sval_33]

Hi, just read the first chapter - very cool beginning. Can't wait to read the next one. Thanks for this.

SImonA