Hmmm. So Kyven's eyes catch her attention. This will cause some more-than-slightly-frantic reasoning on her part! Wonder how that's going to work out?Fel wrote:Cookie!Lochar wrote: An eidetic memory, and Kyven's features (most likely his eyes) catch her.
Gonna be interesting. I'm sure there will be some interesting fall-out, too.Anyway, Fel, some fascinating writing here. While I wouldn't object to a chapter a day, I also realize that's more than a little unreasonable. Still, I am allowed to dream, aren't I?
Ah, Lochar? The Shadow Fox specifically stated that humans have never seen a shadow fox (I assume (stupid, I know) that means alive or dead). She also stated that he is the only shadow fox arcan. So the humans, at least until Fel changes the rules again, will probably continue to believe that Kyven is a mutated gray fox.
Oh, Fel, did you catch the continuity error I posted earlier? (I probably shouldn't have done it in the chapter announcement thread, though. mea culpa.)
About Dancer's companion, Night, being introduced as a canine and then shapeshifting to a panther a couple paragraphs later? Or was that intentional?Nicolai
).I remember reading about the the guy who wrote shogun , who then came out with this novel, that nobody liked too much. At the time , he said , he wrote it because it had to be written.Seems it was written about his experiences, as a POW in a Japanese camp, and it proved a catharsis for his soul.
