Re: Conviction, Chapter 1.
Posted: Wed Oct 28, 2015 5:54 pm
I enjoyed that. Great chapter, thanks Fel 
Hi Fel
Thanks a lot, can't wait!
Ralph
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Re: Conviction, Chapter 1.
Posted: Wed Oct 28, 2015 9:15 pm
Re: Conviction, Chapter 1.
Posted: Wed Oct 28, 2015 10:17 pm
Great chapter.
But now I'm REALLY feeling the need for a wiki. Or at least a glossary. Lol.
Guess I'll need to do some re-reading. Woe is me.
But now I'm REALLY feeling the need for a wiki. Or at least a glossary. Lol.
Guess I'll need to do some re-reading. Woe is me.
Re: Conviction, Chapter 1.
Posted: Thu Oct 29, 2015 5:07 pm
Thank you, Fel 
Re: Conviction, Chapter 1.
Posted: Thu Oct 29, 2015 9:57 pm
Whoot!! Can't wait to read it! Thanks a ton Fel!
Re: Conviction, Chapter 1.
Posted: Fri Oct 30, 2015 6:07 am
Awesome Thanks Fel
Re: Conviction, Chapter 1.
Posted: Fri Oct 30, 2015 12:44 pm
Wow, thanks Fel
Re: Conviction, Chapter 1.
Posted: Sat Oct 31, 2015 7:26 pm
woot! reading this new chapter on halloween. one of my all time fav stories
thanks fel!
thanks fel!
Re: Conviction, Chapter 1.
Posted: Sat Oct 31, 2015 9:15 pm
Thanks Fel =D
Re: Conviction, Chapter 1.
Posted: Wed Nov 04, 2015 5:45 am
Thank you Fel. This little bonus is appreciated.
Re: Conviction, Chapter 1.
Posted: Fri Nov 06, 2015 11:14 pm
Fel, thank you from the bottom of my heart.
Re: Conviction, Chapter 1.
Posted: Sat Nov 07, 2015 6:36 pm
Enjoyed really good read Thank you very much
Re: Conviction, Chapter 1.
Posted: Sun Nov 08, 2015 10:01 pm
Ah Fel, your timing was perfect!
Thank you for sharing your toys with us!
Thank you for sharing your toys with us!
Re: Conviction, Chapter 1.
Posted: Mon Nov 09, 2015 3:36 am
Wow 
Thanks mate
Thanks mate
Re: Conviction, Chapter 1.
Posted: Sat Nov 14, 2015 5:44 pm
One quibble that just threw me. This bit is somewhat confusing:
Is it Baaen that's 'the first of Aris' many half-god "love children"', or Tianne? Assuming it's the latter, it would probably be clearer if you moved 'the first child of Aris that wasn't Baaen' to the end.The choice of the name Tianne wasn't all that surprising. She was a figure from Faey mythology whose closest comparison to Terran mythology was the Angel of Death, the first child of Aris that wasn't Baaen, the first of Aris' many half-god "love children" with mortal men, who was brought into Trelle's domain to serve the Trinity.