Unification, chapter 5.
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Really a cliffhanger, now how long do I have to hang here for chapter 6??
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That cliff hanger is classic...
Due to my migration to the new macbook pro ( 4GB) I have only just seen chapters 4 and 5 but what a nice surprise.
Due to my migration to the new macbook pro ( 4GB) I have only just seen chapters 4 and 5 but what a nice surprise.
"Bachelors should be heavily taxed. It is not fair that some men should be happier than others." - Oscar Wilde
What actually happened was that George Dubya Bush saw an Iraqi maths teacher carrying a geometry set, accused him of being a member of the notorious Al-gebra movement, and charged him with possessing weapons of maths instruction.
What actually happened was that George Dubya Bush saw an Iraqi maths teacher carrying a geometry set, accused him of being a member of the notorious Al-gebra movement, and charged him with possessing weapons of maths instruction.
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wohoo!
Now THAT's how you end a chapter! I can't wait until the next part, that was an amazing chapter! It ended so perfectly _evil!_
Now THAT's how you end a chapter! I can't wait until the next part, that was an amazing chapter! It ended so perfectly _evil!_
I'd gladly travel back in time, except I would have to wait longer for the next chapter of Fel's work...sorry, pass.
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I disagree, this chapter was very well written and just had a certain flow that the Sword of Fire was just beginning to display. If anything, I think you've gotten better at being evil.Fel wrote:Before someone else says it, I must claim the utter masterpiece that was chapter 18 of The Sword of Fire.deane wrote:groan love your writing fel but man a cliff hanger wow and what a cliff hanger it is. good job but wow I don't think I've EVER seen a cliff hanger like this!
My greatest achievement...*sniff.*
Where art thou, O perfection of my evil!
I'd gladly travel back in time, except I would have to wait longer for the next chapter of Fel's work...sorry, pass.
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firedrake3
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And again we are punched in the face by another of your masterful cliffhangers. By the way great chapter. 
An objective definition of "Political Correctness":
"A doctrine fostered by a delusional, illogical, liberal minority, and
rabidly promoted by an unscrupulous mainstream media, which holds forth the
proposition that it is entirely possible to pick up a turd by the clean end."
"A doctrine fostered by a delusional, illogical, liberal minority, and
rabidly promoted by an unscrupulous mainstream media, which holds forth the
proposition that it is entirely possible to pick up a turd by the clean end."
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Wow, your not kidding cliffhanger.Fel wrote:Here it is. Cliffhangers and all.
Great job. Keep it up!
P.S. He was just poking fun at her - She did not need to take him seriously!
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"Molon labe!" (Come and get them!) King Leonidas of Sparta, when asked to lay down his force's arms.
"Those who hammer their guns into plowshares will plow for those who do not." Thomas Jefferson
If tyranny & oppression come to this land, it will be in the guise of fighting a foreign enemy. James Madison
I tell ye true, liberty is the best of all things; never live beneath the noose of a servile halter. William Wallace, Address to the Scots, circa 1300
“The great object is, that every man be armed. [...] Every one who is able may have a gun.” Patrick Henry
"Those who hammer their guns into plowshares will plow for those who do not." Thomas Jefferson
If tyranny & oppression come to this land, it will be in the guise of fighting a foreign enemy. James Madison
I tell ye true, liberty is the best of all things; never live beneath the noose of a servile halter. William Wallace, Address to the Scots, circa 1300
“The great object is, that every man be armed. [...] Every one who is able may have a gun.” Patrick Henry
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btw, 3400/300 = 11.33, that can't be right?
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Dang it Fel, 
A cliff hanger of this size, you better have chapter 6 written and ready to post in a few hours, couse
you are going to make us nuts. Love it, but who would have thought of that story twist,
man that
sure takes the story in a different twisted line, and the hooks you are making into it, dang it.
Please post chapter 6 quickly
UrsaMajor
A cliff hanger of this size, you better have chapter 6 written and ready to post in a few hours, couse
you are going to make us nuts. Love it, but who would have thought of that story twist,
man that sure takes the story in a different twisted line, and the hooks you are making into it, dang it.
Please post chapter 6 quickly
UrsaMajor
UrsaMajor
"To Absent Friends"
'The West is were we belong, The Wolves and I,
And my old friends now dead,
May we meet again on the other side.' Blue Horse, Lakota Warrior
"To Absent Friends"
'The West is were we belong, The Wolves and I,
And my old friends now dead,
May we meet again on the other side.' Blue Horse, Lakota Warrior
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Brilliant Fel! Suddenly a dozen things are going on at once...
Represented by Senator Riyo Chuchi
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thanks fel , awesome stuff!!
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Great job! Looking forward to the next chapter!
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I had a feeling that twist was coming, it was just a matter of time and how it would manifest.UrsaMajor wrote:Dang it Fel,
A cliff hanger of this size, you better have chapter 6 written and ready to post in a few hours, couse
you are going to make us nuts. Love it, but who would have thought of that story twist,
sure takes the story in a different twisted line, and the hooks you are making into it, dang it.
Please post chapter 6 quickly
UrsaMajor
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michaelsuave
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Wow, nice chapter and cliff hanger... so how's chapter 6 coming along? <-----Greedy for chapters*
~Michael
<-----Greedy for chapters*~Michael
Tin Foil... Still putting down money that its the key for the defeat of the baddies...
Fel, Is it done yet? Probably not, but I don't have anything better to do! Is it done yet? Probably not, but I don't have anything better to do! Ahhh, its done... dang, now what am I going to read???
New books! Yay! let the nagging begin! Is it done yet? Probably not, but I don't have anything better to do! Is it done yet? Probably not, but I don't have anything better to do!...
True, I really have nothing better to do in my free time, I mean, what could be better than reading Fel's stories or being messed with by Spec? Thanks for the fun spec!
Fel, Is it done yet? Probably not, but I don't have anything better to do! Is it done yet? Probably not, but I don't have anything better to do! Ahhh, its done... dang, now what am I going to read???
New books! Yay! let the nagging begin! Is it done yet? Probably not, but I don't have anything better to do! Is it done yet? Probably not, but I don't have anything better to do!...
True, I really have nothing better to do in my free time, I mean, what could be better than reading Fel's stories or being messed with by Spec? Thanks for the fun spec!
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U the best Fel
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Heelllloooooo......... heeellllppppp..... my fingers are starting to cramp up, Fel how long more are you going to leave me hanging on this cliff???
When can I get these poor fingers on chapter 6??
When can I get these poor fingers on chapter 6??