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Re: Spirit Walker, chapter 21.

Posted: Sun Sep 21, 2008 8:04 pm
by IdiotPaste
Great new chapter Fel. Thanks.

Re: Spirit Walker, chapter 21.

Posted: Sun Sep 21, 2008 8:44 pm
by UrsaMajor
Cool, loved it..but I think that it isn't barry that is being heard, Sounds more like this"
The March of Cambreadth,

Axes flash, broadsword swing,
Shining armour's piercing ring
Horses run with polished shield,
Fight Those Bastards till They Yield
Midnight mare and blood red roan,
Fight to Keep this Land Your Own
Sound the horn and call the cry,
How Many of Them Can We Make Die!

Keep up the good work and can't wait for the first chapter of the second book

UrsaMajor

Re: Spirit Walker, chapter 21.

Posted: Mon Sep 22, 2008 12:32 am
by nicolai
Well done, well done indeed.

KUDOS!

An excellent and appropriate ending for the story. Perhaps a trifle rushed, but it works very well indeed. I look forward with great anticipation to Shadow Walker.

In the meantime, I shall continue to enjoy whatever you do write.

Nicolai

Re: Spirit Walker, chapter 21.

Posted: Mon Sep 22, 2008 1:20 am
by Gabriel
Thanks for the chapter FEL, I guess this means I need to start from the begining of this story.

Came across your stories when you had finished book Demon's Bane, been hooked since and lurking. :oops:

Re: Spirit Walker, chapter 21.

Posted: Mon Sep 22, 2008 2:11 am
by kabalman2000
UrsaMajor wrote:Sounds more like this "The March of Cambreadth,
I really like that song. but I was drawn more to Barry because of the line mentioning not believing in war.

Anyway, I'm certainly in a quandary as I'm into this story-line and want to get on with it, but I also want more of the subjugation universe. Go Kyvin! No, go Jason! Kyvin! Jason! Tastes great! Less filling!

Makes one think of that little poem.

Roses are red
violets are blue
I'm pschizophrenic
and so am I

Re: Spirit Walker, chapter 21.

Posted: Mon Sep 22, 2008 10:21 am
by Spec8472
Mansoor B. K. wrote:
Fel wrote:How many times do I have to tell you guys, there's another book planned for this series. ;)
fel , i have a question,this unification novel, its in the faey world or the extention of spirit walker
It's in the Subjugation universe. Straight from the horses mouth sources authors cold dead hands

Re: Spirit Walker, chapter 21.

Posted: Mon Sep 22, 2008 10:30 am
by afrigeek
it becomes even more interesting when you start chanting go Tarrin, Go Kyven, Go Jason...

I want all of them NOW!!!

Re: Spirit Walker, chapter 21.

Posted: Mon Sep 22, 2008 12:49 pm
by Mad Monk
afrigeek wrote:it becomes even more interesting when you start chanting go Tarrin, Go Kyven, Go Jason...

I want all of them NOW!!!
You've left out Fox, although to be honest, we haven't seen enough of him to get really excited about him. All of them are world-shakers in their own ways.

I also like Kit, because he seems a simple bloke trying to have a simple life - he makes a nice contrast to the others.

Re: Spirit Walker, chapter 21.

Posted: Mon Sep 22, 2008 6:44 pm
by michaelsuave
Nice chapter Fel! Looking forward to the next installment. :)

~Michaelsuave

Re: Spirit Walker, chapter 21.

Posted: Mon Sep 22, 2008 7:40 pm
by LADY MINX
good ending there i really enjoyed it
wish there was more but we understand.
now we wait for the next book

Re: Spirit Walker, chapter 21.

Posted: Tue Sep 23, 2008 1:43 pm
by NSC
Way back in chapter 6, on the boat, there was mention of a black crystal powered device that Kyven threw overboard. There was no mention of what it did. I figure it would affect arcans only, but what was that device supposed to do? Also, does being "touched" factor into the story any more?

Re: Spirit Walker, chapter 21.

Posted: Sat Sep 27, 2008 2:33 pm
by Journeywoman
Thanks Fel :).

Re: Spirit Walker, chapter 21.

Posted: Fri Jan 02, 2009 10:39 am
by Hawkeye
Thank you for a great story!