Revelation, Chapter 11.

User avatar
wetnomad
Katzh-dashi
Posts: 101
Joined: Thu Nov 01, 2012 8:42 am
Location: Hants, England

Re: Revelation, Chapter 11.

Post by wetnomad »

Many thanks for the early xmas prezzie Fel. :)
NegativeEnergy
Novice
Posts: 16
Joined: Fri Jun 11, 2010 7:57 pm

Re: Revelation, Chapter 11.

Post by NegativeEnergy »

Thank you for early Xmas present.
User avatar
khyranleander
Initiate
Posts: 41
Joined: Fri Sep 15, 2006 6:20 pm

Re: Revelation, Chapter 11.

Post by khyranleander »

Thanks, Fel
User avatar
Lochar
Leaders of the Off-Topic
Posts: 1476
Joined: Thu Oct 09, 2003 4:18 pm
Location: The center of American corruption.
Contact:

Re: Revelation, Chapter 11.

Post by Lochar »

No issues with swapping over between old and new laptop. And a very nice lead-in to the next big thing mixed in with a fun glimpse of the world.
Ignorance is bliss, knowledge is power. Are the powerful very unhappy?

Support my brother.
http://www.justiceformichael.com
pjoug
Talent
Posts: 7
Joined: Wed Dec 25, 2019 12:56 am

Re: Revelation, Chapter 11.

Post by pjoug »

Thanks FEL
adriapirat
Talent
Posts: 3
Joined: Fri Aug 13, 2021 10:38 pm
Location: Germany

Re: Revelation, Chapter 11.

Post by adriapirat »

Thank you FEL
konman
Da'Shar
Posts: 150
Joined: Fri Dec 26, 2008 3:06 am
Location: BC, Canada

Re: Revelation, Chapter 11.

Post by konman »

Thanks Fel!
Everyone has A photographic memory.
Some just don't have any film!
User avatar
khyranleander
Initiate
Posts: 41
Joined: Fri Sep 15, 2006 6:20 pm

Re: Revelation, Chapter 11.

Post by khyranleander »

Took me a couple days before had a chance to read this. Very cool, both in itself and because the new plot aspect is vaguely akin to one of my all-time favorite (and unfinished) stories, David R Palmer's Threshold.

It really is a VAGUE tie: similar start with a Terran exposed to an advanced race of aliens, and an overarching foe *kinda* like the one you just introduced, but the overlap pretty much ends there (his hero actually turns himself into a kind of dragon at one point!). Still, it'd add a comforting sense of closure to see how you end up resolving the end conflict he never got around to directly addressing. So extra thanks for that!
User avatar
mjkj
Katzh-dashi
Posts: 144
Joined: Wed Feb 20, 2013 2:08 pm

Re: Revelation, Chapter 11.

Post by mjkj »

Thank you, Fel :mrgreen:
Rakarath
Sorcerer
Posts: 52
Joined: Sun May 12, 2013 5:39 pm
Location: Northern Ireland

Re: Revelation, Chapter 11.

Post by Rakarath »

Cheers Fel !
Seanot
Talent
Posts: 7
Joined: Sat Sep 06, 2014 9:32 pm

Re: Revelation, Chapter 11.

Post by Seanot »

Thank you for the new chapter!
betatester
Katzh-dashi
Posts: 111
Joined: Thu May 29, 2014 3:00 pm
Location: Melbourne

Re: Revelation, Chapter 11.

Post by betatester »

Thank you Fel, been late to the party but still nice Christmas gift
zooplbr
Sorcerer
Posts: 89
Joined: Tue Dec 28, 2004 8:31 pm
Location: Ft. Worth Texas

Re: Revelation, Chapter 11.

Post by zooplbr »

Beautiful....
XavDan
Novice
Posts: 15
Joined: Sun Jul 04, 2021 10:53 am

Re: Revelation, Chapter 11.

Post by XavDan »

Thanks for the chapter.Good companion over the holidays
OldGrumpInTraining
Talent
Posts: 6
Joined: Sun Nov 13, 2022 8:02 pm

Re: Revelation, Chapter 11.

Post by OldGrumpInTraining »

I already thanked you Fel, but I must say that this chapter is one of the most enjoyable that I can remember. Maybe not the best, but the most enjoyable :D
Post Reply