Citadel Online.

Miscelanious Short Stories
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I have only one quibble. How is this a short story? I mean a Novella sure, but it has 9 chapters!
I'd gladly travel back in time, except I would have to wait longer for the next chapter of Fel's work...sorry, pass.
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This was so amazing. Would love for this story line to continue!
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Thanks FEL! Silly me let RL get in the way for a bit and look what I missed!

Oh well, I have something to enjoy now.
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Is this part of the Subjugation "universe" or a separate/different story?
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Part of it.
Telling and much expanding some backstory used in Subjugation from a new POV.

I'd say Subjugation makes sense without it but publishing this short story between chapters 6 and 7 makes much sense since it slots in there.
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Chasm wrote: Wed Oct 09, 2019 6:21 pm Part of it.
Telling and much expanding some backstory used in Subjugation from a new POV.

I'd say Subjugation makes sense without it but publishing this short story between chapters 6 and 7 makes much sense since it slots in there.
Thank you.
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bluemax65 wrote: Mon Oct 14, 2019 12:22 pm
Chasm wrote: Wed Oct 09, 2019 6:21 pm Part of it.
Telling and much expanding some backstory used in Subjugation from a new POV.

I'd say Subjugation makes sense without it but publishing this short story between chapters 6 and 7 makes much sense since it slots in there.
Thank you.
Sorry, just to be clear. This story fits in between Inception and Conviction. Right?
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bluemax65 wrote: Tue Oct 15, 2019 12:29 pm
bluemax65 wrote: Mon Oct 14, 2019 12:22 pm
Chasm wrote: Wed Oct 09, 2019 6:21 pm Part of it.
Telling and much expanding some backstory used in Subjugation from a new POV.

I'd say Subjugation makes sense without it but publishing this short story between chapters 6 and 7 makes much sense since it slots in there.
Thank you.
Sorry, just to be clear. This story fits in between Inception and Conviction. Right?

Fel posted it between chapter 6 and 7 of Revelation. That is where the storylines converge.
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Thank you.
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hope we'll see more of C.O. was fun
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Has anyone else recognized the name Kevin Ball? He is a character in the show Shameless. I thought it looked familiar when Fel introduced the character.
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