The Fovean Chronicles Online - Need opinions

[Lochar]

clearly, I must get out the whip.

WRITE FASTER! FASTER, DARN YOU!

*crack!*

My, it feels...good, to do that to someone rather than have it done to me.

Score!

Doesn't it though?

[SHALIK_TEX]

I have just recently found you story. I have just finished reading the first three chapters of book 1 and would like to read the rest before getting into book 2. If there is any way I could do this I would love to read it. So far I would like to say I enjoy your writing. You set a good introduction and have kept the flow going in a good direction. Well thats just my two cents...

[Fovean_Author]

I have just recently found you story. I have just finished reading the first three chapters of book 1 and would like to read the rest before getting into book 2. If there is any way I could do this I would love to read it. So far I would like to say I enjoy your writing. You set a good introduction and have kept the flow going in a good direction. Well thats just my two cents...

You can read it right on the site - look at the bottom of the page and you can see a link either to Lulu.com or PayPal, where it will run you like $3.00

[Fovean_Author]

OK - updates are done up to chapter 42. If you've been following the story, I'd REALLY like some opinions on the new direction over the old from Chap 39 on.

[Fovean_Author]

What do you guys think of the new site?

http://www.intwiz.com

[Fovean_Author]

OK, guys - book two, Indomitus Oriens, is DONE.

Well, the rough is. As well you know, there's still the pass back and then the rewrite, then enough editing to choke a walrus.

But the words are all there, and you can see how it ends.

As long as I get comments, it will stay up. If not, well - I appreciate that a lot of you have put a lot of effort into reading me, and there WILL be autographed copies.

Let me know what you think, please!

[Mysterious]

A Shakespearean ending...

You left a lot of dead bodies with protagonists finding Enlightenment at the end. You also left a lot of loose ends for you to easily enter into with the third book so that is good as well. Overall this has been a pretty entertaining read


Keep up the Good Work


Mysterious

[Fovean_Author]

Thanks - you've really spent some time reading me and I appreciate it

There's two things I'm worried about right now - does the beginning drag, and have I left enough room at the end for a proper conclusion?

I don't want to write a spoiler, but at the end you can see why they had to die. I'm wondering if I shouldn't shorten up the Battle of the Vice and spread the deaths out more