Earth Bond, chapters 1-3.

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Earth Bond, chapters 1-3.

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Alright, so, my curiosity about this one, quite honestly, got the best of me, so I developed it a little bit.

It's also a combination of me having a case of writer's block concerning finishing Shadow Walker.

So, it may not be Shadow Walker, but it is SOMETHING.

And I'd like some honest feedback about this one. I tweaked these 3 chapters over and over, and still felt like it wasn't exactly right.

I also couldn't really think of a really good name, so I just went with that.

Anyway, read, consider, critique. And as always, enjoy.
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Thanks mate, that looks to be an interesting tale you are are going to share with us.
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thank you for a new story !
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Fel mate, that is an awesome tale! I couldn't stop till I had read all 3 chapters, understand completely why that idea caught your interest until you got it down on paper.

I don't want to discuss it in here much more, I should be over in the other slot speculating for all it is worth LOL

Title suits it well, maybe there is a more apt title out there but it isn't jumping up and down in my head clamouring for attention so Earth Bond suits what I have read so far.

Maybe you need to add a bit to the preamble that it is a tad political, probably even more than your other tales. It is also nicely geeky, the geeks amongst us will absorb this tale, not just read it.

Lastly, please keep this on the go, 3 chapters is nowhere near enough to slake my thirst for this adventure ;)

PS: Amazing, I get to be 1st and 3rd poster, where are the rest of you? Ahh well, you know what they say, "Early bird gets the wyrm" <giggling behind the screen>
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Was going crazy this morning with all these messages popping up in my reader service thanking FEL for SOMETHING!

Then I finally received the note from FEL and life got better. Will be reading this today, one way or another!

Thanks FEL, I have been craving some serious fiction!
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great start m8
please do go on
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Well, there went my morning...

Thanks for the new storyline Fel! It's most interesting, especially since I'm rather a geek. I certainly look forward to future installments!

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Thanks Fel...
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Hearly wrote:Thanks Fel...
ok moderators crank out a new section in the latest chapters announcement forum , cause this looks like a keeper. thanks mate.
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Thanks Fel!
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Oh that is really nice. Not sure who I'm pulling more for. Again thanks Fel for your time :))


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Thanks Fel. This is definitely a keeper.

I almost cannot wait to finish all the chapters and read through the night. When is the next coming. :D
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Finally found time to read this.

Thanks Fel. I really enjoyed this story. :mrgreen:
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Mizriath wrote:Thanks Fel. This is definitely a keeper.

I almost cannot wait to finish all the chapters and read through the night. When is the next coming. :D
I did just the opposite.read one a day to spread out the enjoyment.
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dellstart wrote:I did just the opposite.read one a day to spread out the enjoyment.
I admire your discipline.... you can call me an undisciplined child. :twisted: One of those were child. You finish what you start at that moment... tomorrow is another day, another issues.... never ending. :wink:
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