Thor's Child to Ch 20

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Thor's Child to Ch 20

Post by GBLW » Fri Dec 30, 2011 8:41 pm

Aww, why not go for a hat-trick and add a chapter for a third story.
(This chapter was getting a bit long, so I kinda chopped it off where I thought it was appropriate - :twisted: )

Happy New Year all!

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Re: Thor's Child to Ch 20

Post by firedrake3 » Sat Dec 31, 2011 7:16 am

You wonderfully evil man thank you for the hat-trick. :D
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Re: Thor's Child to Ch 20

Post by gesit » Sat Dec 31, 2011 7:48 am

Thanks for all your hard work m8,
still i do think that you're evil,,,
now i wont have any rest till the next chapters!!
happy new year and all the best!


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Re: Thor's Child to Ch 20

Post by zedd » Sat Dec 31, 2011 4:14 pm

thank you.

happy new year

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Re: Thor's Child to Ch 20

Post by A-Space » Sat Dec 31, 2011 7:16 pm

Thanks - Happy New Year.
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Re: Thor's Child to Ch 20

Post by artreus » Sun Jan 01, 2012 10:08 am


would appreciate for the sections where uncl nils is talking to be translated tho,
i cannot understand half of it.

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Re: Thor's Child to Ch 20

Post by giddiani » Wed Jan 04, 2012 3:17 pm

Woohoo! Thanks for the new year's gift!

I really appreciate it.

@artreus: that's kinda the point.

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Re: Thor's Child to Ch 20

Post by artreus » Wed Jan 04, 2012 9:43 pm

well , if the point is for none english native speakers to skip those paragraphs, then the point is established :-),

i would rather hope the point is to create a certain 'feel' but still make the story understandable, for everyone to enjoy it. (which i do) .

luckily for me the aunt usually tells thor the same as what i think the uncle says, so i hope i am not missing a lot.

just to be clear, i read the first 19 chapters without problems, probably becaus i started when ch 19 came out, and i grew into that language of him, but reading ch20 a few weeks later gave me more problems in half of his paragraphs because by then i was no longer used to that language ( or maybe because he had more speech time in that chapter ? )

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Re: Thor's Child to Ch 20

Post by stevenp07 » Wed Feb 15, 2012 4:05 am

Just finished what's been posted and can't wait for more!