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Detour to Otherwhen - chapter 8

Posted: Thu Sep 29, 2011 12:54 am
by GBLW
Here's another chapter -- rushed to print. After a reread I realize that what I wrote might be thought of as a tiny little cliff hanger - sorry 'bout that, but at least you know that the next chapter will start out at an interesting point.

K Pelle

Re: Detour to Otherwhen - chapter 8

Posted: Thu Sep 29, 2011 2:19 am
by konman
Thanks a lot.

Great reading.

Re: Detour to Otherwhen - chapter 8

Posted: Thu Sep 29, 2011 8:47 am
by zedd
Thank you

Re: Detour to Otherwhen - chapter 8

Posted: Thu Sep 29, 2011 10:46 pm
by ThisAndThat1
Wow 85 downloads and just three people reply.

Thanks!

Re: Detour to Otherwhen - chapter 8

Posted: Fri Sep 30, 2011 12:52 am
by Delvfar
VERY COOL!

Believe it or not I have participated in an event much like you described though not at all for the same reason! :)

It was a Halloween haunted forest and we had surrounded a clearing of about an acre with10 foot tall translucent manicans, each of which had a 3 color light inside them.

A tale was told and the conclusion of it was the circle slowly being lit. Very Spooky and very effective! Great way to end this chapter!

Looking forward to what comes next!

John Delvfar

Re: Detour to Otherwhen - chapter 8

Posted: Fri Sep 30, 2011 12:42 pm
by crxbnt
Thanks for the new chapter! This is a great story, and I am glad to see the chapters steadily appear.

Thanks for sharing with us.

crxbnt

Re: Detour to Otherwhen - chapter 8

Posted: Sat Oct 01, 2011 5:13 pm
by giddiani
Thanks for continuing to include us in your wonderful world.