Detour to Otherwhen - chapter 8

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Detour to Otherwhen - chapter 8

Post by GBLW » Thu Sep 29, 2011 12:54 am

Here's another chapter -- rushed to print. After a reread I realize that what I wrote might be thought of as a tiny little cliff hanger - sorry 'bout that, but at least you know that the next chapter will start out at an interesting point.

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Re: Detour to Otherwhen - chapter 8

Post by konman » Thu Sep 29, 2011 2:19 am

Thanks a lot.

Great reading.
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Re: Detour to Otherwhen - chapter 8

Post by zedd » Thu Sep 29, 2011 8:47 am

Thank you

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Re: Detour to Otherwhen - chapter 8

Post by ThisAndThat1 » Thu Sep 29, 2011 10:46 pm

Wow 85 downloads and just three people reply.

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Re: Detour to Otherwhen - chapter 8

Post by Delvfar » Fri Sep 30, 2011 12:52 am


Believe it or not I have participated in an event much like you described though not at all for the same reason! :)

It was a Halloween haunted forest and we had surrounded a clearing of about an acre with10 foot tall translucent manicans, each of which had a 3 color light inside them.

A tale was told and the conclusion of it was the circle slowly being lit. Very Spooky and very effective! Great way to end this chapter!

Looking forward to what comes next!

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Re: Detour to Otherwhen - chapter 8

Post by crxbnt » Fri Sep 30, 2011 12:42 pm

Thanks for the new chapter! This is a great story, and I am glad to see the chapters steadily appear.

Thanks for sharing with us.


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Re: Detour to Otherwhen - chapter 8

Post by giddiani » Sat Oct 01, 2011 5:13 pm

Thanks for continuing to include us in your wonderful world.