Thor's Child - Chapter 3

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Thor's Child - Chapter 3

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I didn't think I should leave my readers hanging on that cliff for too long. So here's another chapter. (There''s a smaller cliff on this one.)

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16 downloads already? -- anyone would think people are hanging out for new chapters of whatever great piece of writing is updated next :)

I don't mind interesting events about to happen at the end of a chapter, as long as i don't have to wait 2 years for the next chapter :) (unlike some writers who seem to think that its a great way to boost next book sales ...)

(and first :P , i think its the first time i can say this )
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I am really enjoying this, but you don't have to include the whole story
in the zip for each chapter :) . Other than that a very good read, and enjoyable.

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great m8
thanks

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UrsaMajor wrote:I am really enjoying this, but you don't have to include the whole story
in the zip for each chapter :) . Other than that a very good read, and enjoyable.

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LOL :lol:
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Well, that was exciting!

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Someone will probably win a bet as I ask this, but when will he start hurling lightning bolts or wielding Mjöllnir?

Sorry, have to ask. Tor? Thor? C'mon, you had to expect it....

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Sorry, neither lightning bolts nor Mjöllnir are in the plot line and although his birth certificate reads T-H-O-R, it was written out by a hospital administrator who was English. He's a Swede. His name is pronounced Tor.
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Nice pace :)
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Very nice chapter :D

Thank you
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I admit that I like having all the previous chapters and being able to click on them to keep the story in perspective.
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That was an extremely good read! A great way to relax for my lunch and get away from the problems at my desk. Thanks for sharing that with us. Please continue.

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Pretty good.
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