Assimilation Chapters 2 and 3

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Assimilation Chapters 2 and 3

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Hi folks,

Here is another fanfic, based in the Subjugation universe.

Details of the Subjugation universe and the Faey are (c) Fel

This story is written by Dellstart and the Mad Monk.

For those who would like additional information:

Some info on Kelpies (GG is a working Kelpie) http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Australian_Kelpie

Kangaroos as meat http://calorielab.com/news/2005/09/06/k ... diet-food/

Article on the Burmese Karen http://news.bbc.co.uk/1/hi/257514.stm
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I like where this story is going. Might not be quite so fantastic as Jason's adventures, but still intriguing

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Re: Assimilation Chapters 2 and 3

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I'm liking this story, too.
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Re: Assimilation Chapters 2 and 3

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Interesting read. The characters are all likable and varied. However you might want to chose a way to better distinguish thoughts from speach, (Using '' instead of "" or using italics often work.) and I found it a little confusing the way you kept jumping from one Point of View to another.

And now, having said all that, all that's left to do isb ask about chapter 4...

Is it done yet? Probably not, but I don't have anything better to do! :)
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ANTIcarrot wrote:Is it done yet? Probably not, but I don't have anything better to do! Probably not, but I don't have anything better to do! :)

I suppose you could always write more :P
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Almost forgot. The insulting nickname that Matty uses for the Faey - "cassowaries" is because they are blue skinned birds.

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Re: Assimilation Chapters 2 and 3

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Thank you!

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