Assimilation - Chapter 1

Stories written by people other than Fel, set in Fel's universes.

Moderator: Contributing Authors

Locked
Mad Monk
Sui'Kun
Posts: 273
Joined: Mon Jan 22, 2007 12:03 am
Location: England

Assimilation - Chapter 1

Post by Mad Monk »

Hi folks,

Here is another fanfic, based in the Subjugation universe.

Details of the Subjugation universe and the Faey are (c) Fel

This story is written by Dellstart and the Mad Monk.
Attachments
assimilation1.doc
(69.5 KiB) Downloaded 2003 times
assimilation_1-10.zip
GBLW has compiled Assimilation 1-10 into one handy set of HTML files - Well done Sir!
(155.59 KiB) Downloaded 1291 times
Rational people have supported the worst dictators of history - Hitler, Stalin, Mao, Pol Pot, etc.

I'm mad - at least I have an excuse for what I do.
Mad Monk
Sui'Kun
Posts: 273
Joined: Mon Jan 22, 2007 12:03 am
Location: England

Re: Assimilation - Chapter 1

Post by Mad Monk »

I should add:

Several of the main characters don't actually speak English, they speak Strine. Here is a handy Strine - English dictionary
http://www.abc.net.au/civics/globalciti ... strine.htm

Cricket is a game played in England. In Australia it is not a game, but a way of life. http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Cricket

The Bogong Moths do exist http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Bogong_moth
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Weim-gMo ... re=related
Rational people have supported the worst dictators of history - Hitler, Stalin, Mao, Pol Pot, etc.

I'm mad - at least I have an excuse for what I do.
User avatar
ANTIcarrot
Sui'Kun
Posts: 444
Joined: Fri Mar 04, 2005 12:19 pm
Location: Stevenage, UK
Contact:

Re: Assimilation - Chapter 1

Post by ANTIcarrot »

I think you may have laid on the 'ozstrainian' a little too thickly in places. :-)

The story also ends here:
“Right, mate” came the reply as Matty got up, and started towards the barn with the bike. s the barn with the bike.
Is there some missing?

PS: Second place! :P
I is an certified nut
Mad Monk
Sui'Kun
Posts: 273
Joined: Mon Jan 22, 2007 12:03 am
Location: England

Re: Assimilation - Chapter 1

Post by Mad Monk »

ANTIcarrot wrote:I think you may have laid on the 'ozstrainian' a little too thickly in places. :-)
We'll try to tone it down a bit. It actually is how some folks in the outback speak though. Be glad, one of the ideas we had was to set it in the north of England. Then it would have been ferrets and racing pigeons, and a broad Geordie accent. Even I can't understand them, even though I enjoy Andy Capp cartoons.
The story also ends here:
“Right, mate” came the reply as Matty got up, and started towards the barn with the bike. s the barn with the bike.
Is there some missing?

PS: Second place! :P
Sorry, just a stutter. (its a copy of the end of the last sentence.)

Well done on Second place :P
Rational people have supported the worst dictators of history - Hitler, Stalin, Mao, Pol Pot, etc.

I'm mad - at least I have an excuse for what I do.
User avatar
dellstart
Child of Niami
Posts: 1062
Joined: Wed Sep 05, 2007 10:20 pm
Location: The Holy SCG

Re: Assimilation - Chapter 1

Post by dellstart »

what do two pommie bastards know about how we Aussies speak any ways ?????? :P
Hawkeye
Initiate
Posts: 42
Joined: Thu Dec 28, 2006 5:04 pm

Re: Assimilation - Chapter 1

Post by Hawkeye »

Good start! :)

Hawkeye
Locked