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Re: Citadel Online.

Posted: Fri Oct 04, 2019 4:43 pm
by Sancria
I have only one quibble. How is this a short story? I mean a Novella sure, but it has 9 chapters!

Re: Citadel Online.

Posted: Mon Oct 07, 2019 3:32 am
by Cronus1585
This was so amazing. Would love for this story line to continue!

Re: Citadel Online.

Posted: Mon Oct 07, 2019 10:30 pm
by crxbnt
Thanks FEL! Silly me let RL get in the way for a bit and look what I missed!

Oh well, I have something to enjoy now.

Re: Citadel Online.

Posted: Wed Oct 09, 2019 4:58 pm
by bluemax65
Is this part of the Subjugation "universe" or a separate/different story?

Re: Citadel Online.

Posted: Wed Oct 09, 2019 6:21 pm
by Chasm
Part of it.
Telling and much expanding some backstory used in Subjugation from a new POV.

I'd say Subjugation makes sense without it but publishing this short story between chapters 6 and 7 makes much sense since it slots in there.

Re: Citadel Online.

Posted: Mon Oct 14, 2019 12:22 pm
by bluemax65
Chasm wrote: Wed Oct 09, 2019 6:21 pm Part of it.
Telling and much expanding some backstory used in Subjugation from a new POV.

I'd say Subjugation makes sense without it but publishing this short story between chapters 6 and 7 makes much sense since it slots in there.
Thank you.

Re: Citadel Online.

Posted: Tue Oct 15, 2019 12:29 pm
by bluemax65
bluemax65 wrote: Mon Oct 14, 2019 12:22 pm
Chasm wrote: Wed Oct 09, 2019 6:21 pm Part of it.
Telling and much expanding some backstory used in Subjugation from a new POV.

I'd say Subjugation makes sense without it but publishing this short story between chapters 6 and 7 makes much sense since it slots in there.
Thank you.
Sorry, just to be clear. This story fits in between Inception and Conviction. Right?

Re: Citadel Online.

Posted: Tue Oct 15, 2019 1:40 pm
by Wolfee
bluemax65 wrote: Tue Oct 15, 2019 12:29 pm
bluemax65 wrote: Mon Oct 14, 2019 12:22 pm
Chasm wrote: Wed Oct 09, 2019 6:21 pm Part of it.
Telling and much expanding some backstory used in Subjugation from a new POV.

I'd say Subjugation makes sense without it but publishing this short story between chapters 6 and 7 makes much sense since it slots in there.
Thank you.
Sorry, just to be clear. This story fits in between Inception and Conviction. Right?

Fel posted it between chapter 6 and 7 of Revelation. That is where the storylines converge.

Re: Citadel Online.

Posted: Wed Oct 16, 2019 1:09 am
by bluemax65
Thank you.

Re: Citadel Online.

Posted: Sat Oct 26, 2019 4:27 am
by baengi
hope we'll see more of C.O. was fun

Re: Citadel Online.

Posted: Thu Apr 16, 2020 2:06 am
by Griffinmane
Has anyone else recognized the name Kevin Ball? He is a character in the show Shameless. I thought it looked familiar when Fel introduced the character.