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I think I fixed everything...at least I hope I did. But to warn you now, after doing all that proofreading, I didn't run spellchecker on any chapter. I was too annoyed. So endure the typos.

Mind that this story is not over. It just catches up to the point in Revolution that it needs to be so the next chapter of Revolution doesn't spoil this story.

Enjoy.

Woot first l!!

Thanks Fel, looking forward to reading this!

Thanks Fel. Looking forward to reading it. By the way for You it maybe is a short story but for most authors it would be a novel or two.

There can be only one! FEL !

WOW! Thanks Fel!

Great, now I have something to do while Tropical Storm Imelda squats on us here in Houston!

1.5 MByte of the story - and only work-days in the near future...
This is a small emerging crisis and drastic measures are needed. The garten must wait!

thank you Fel
much appreciated

Fel,

This was awesome, thank you so much.

Thanks Fel looking forward to the read.

Thank you Fel. Gives me something to look forward to this afternoon.

this is amazing. i love this style story.

Thank you, Fel

Thanks Fel!