Citadel Online.

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Citadel Online.

Post by Fel » Wed Sep 18, 2019 10:52 am

I think I fixed everything...at least I hope I did. But to warn you now, after doing all that proofreading, I didn't run spellchecker on any chapter. I was too annoyed. So endure the typos. ;)

Mind that this story is not over. It just catches up to the point in Revolution that it needs to be so the next chapter of Revolution doesn't spoil this story.

Enjoy.
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Re: Citadel Online.

Post by gnume » Wed Sep 18, 2019 12:01 pm

Woot first l!!

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Post by Redwolf1331 » Wed Sep 18, 2019 12:01 pm

Thanks Fel, looking forward to reading this!

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Post by firedrake3 » Wed Sep 18, 2019 12:15 pm

Thanks Fel. Looking forward to reading it. By the way for You it maybe is a short story but for most authors it would be a novel or two.
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Post by Blacktiger » Wed Sep 18, 2019 12:40 pm

There can be only one! FEL ! :mrgreen: :mrgreen: :mrgreen: :mrgreen: :mrgreen: :twisted: :twisted: :twisted: :twisted: :twisted:

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Post by Wolfee » Wed Sep 18, 2019 1:06 pm

WOW! Thanks Fel!
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Post by GotToGo » Wed Sep 18, 2019 1:44 pm

Great, now I have something to do while Tropical Storm Imelda squats on us here in Houston!

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Post by Eurasier » Wed Sep 18, 2019 9:24 pm

1.5 MByte of the story - and only work-days in the near future...
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Re: Citadel Online.

Post by scooter012 » Wed Sep 18, 2019 11:01 pm

thank you Fel
much appreciated

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Post by SoronelHaetir » Wed Sep 18, 2019 11:08 pm

Fel,

This was awesome, thank you so much.

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Post by RobJ » Thu Sep 19, 2019 4:39 am

Thanks Fel looking forward to the read.

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Post by AgCOtter » Thu Sep 19, 2019 4:30 pm

Thank you Fel. Gives me something to look forward to this afternoon. :D
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Post by calista241 » Fri Sep 20, 2019 4:12 am

this is amazing. i love this style story.

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Post by mjkj » Fri Sep 20, 2019 9:21 am

Thank you, Fel :D

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Re: Citadel Online.

Post by felfan3000 » Fri Sep 20, 2019 11:30 am

Thanks Fel!
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