Spelldancer, Chapter 1.

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Re: Spelldancer, Chapter 1.

Post by GBLW » Thu Sep 17, 2015 6:20 am

Thanks Fel -that was a pleasant way to spend a little time - just suspend disbelief and let my imagination of the scene carry me to one of your universes for a short while.
heustess wrote:If you need to spice the story up, you can easily have Shen jump a shark.
And the buzzer sounds - Ennnnnnhhhhhhhhhhhhhh - (no please, he's doing just fine as he is ...) :lol: :lol:
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Re: Spelldancer, Chapter 1.

Post by wetnomad » Thu Sep 17, 2015 6:44 am

Many thanks Fel. :)

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Re: Spelldancer, Chapter 1.

Post by mjkj » Thu Sep 17, 2015 10:38 am

Thank you, Fel

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Re: Spelldancer, Chapter 1.

Post by Cougar2k2 » Thu Sep 17, 2015 12:04 pm

This'll be interesting. Thanks for the chapter Fel!
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Re: Spelldancer, Chapter 1.

Post by postal » Thu Sep 17, 2015 1:25 pm

Most excellently done!!!!!!!!!! Can hardly wait for more!!!!!!!!!!!! :cry: :cry: :cry:

Thanks much,
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Re: Spelldancer, Chapter 1.

Post by Hearly » Thu Sep 17, 2015 2:21 pm

Thanks

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Re: Spelldancer, Chapter 1.

Post by crxbnt » Thu Sep 17, 2015 5:28 pm

Thanks Fe!!

We don't mind doing the spell check.

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Re: Spelldancer, Chapter 1.

Post by calista241 » Thu Sep 17, 2015 7:11 pm

This is awesome. I don't think I've read a better intro chapter before, and that includes works from Robert Jordan, Brandon Sanderson, and others.

Bravo Fel. Really, really good work.

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Re: Spelldancer, Chapter 1.

Post by Hillybob » Thu Sep 17, 2015 9:05 pm

Great first chapter would love to see more of this world.

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Re: Spelldancer, Chapter 1.

Post by Grommley » Fri Sep 18, 2015 4:08 am

Wow. Incredible introduction. Glad you decided to write this one even though the Subjugation series is my all time favorite story. Keep writing what you enjoy. :)
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Re: Spelldancer, Chapter 1.

Post by bherrm » Sat Sep 19, 2015 9:54 pm

Thanks! Keep those chapters coming.

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Re: Spelldancer, Chapter 1.

Post by faut » Sun Sep 20, 2015 7:50 pm

Another great chapter. Thanks Fel!

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Re: Spelldancer, Chapter 1.

Post by ramouton » Mon Sep 21, 2015 5:31 am

Thanks Fel. Awesome as usual. I think I speak for everyone when I say we highly appreciate your efforts.

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Re: Spelldancer, Chapter 1.

Post by Mari » Thu Sep 24, 2015 12:33 am

Oh my word Fell thanks for this. I have been reading your work since 2006 and I can honestly say you are like a fine wine you just get better with age. First chapter is looking good it is a good base to start off. Just have fun writing it!
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Re: Spelldancer, Chapter 1.

Post by tummi » Sun Sep 27, 2015 9:07 pm

Thanks Fel. Great start!!

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