Edits: chapter 4-8

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Edits: chapter 4-8

Post by Fel » Mon Aug 27, 2007 3:46 am

I'm pretty sure I got everything in these chapters. I did do my best to read through them, and I fixed the errors that have already been brought to my attention.

As far as Legacy goes, I took an axe to it, and I cut out about 6 pages, so I'm kinda starting over from page 3.

Not deleted though. The scene I cut I saved, for I felt it was better suited for a later chapter.

My first week of school was pretty nice. I like my professors and though I have a lot of homework, so far it's been INTERESTING homework. I like my classes this semester, and I think it's gonna be a good term.
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Re: Edits: chapter 4-8

Post by Fawks » Mon Aug 27, 2007 5:15 am


*** caveat I have not read the newly reposted chapters yet. ***
I don't know if it was mentioned earlier, but...

I noticed that when Tarrin's parent's moved to Suld, they said that their farm had been completely burned to the ground by a goblin raid on Aldreth. Then, in Weavespinner, Jesmind is living there after only patching a few things.

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Re: Edits: chapter 4-8

Post by gesit » Mon Aug 27, 2007 3:53 pm

great now i have something to read ... lol


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Re: Edits: chapter 4-8

Post by Downdude » Tue Aug 28, 2007 2:47 am

Thanks for the edits. :mrgreen:

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Re: Edits: chapter 4-8

Post by Mizriath » Tue Aug 28, 2007 3:38 am

Thanks Fel. I thought the original had been perfect reading. Well you have to try to make things more perfect. I have to put in effort to read a more perfect effort. :D
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