Insurrection, chapter 2

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Insurrection, chapter 2

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Since I didn't cliffhanger you guys last time, I had to make up for it.

Enjoy.
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Fel wrote:Since I didn't cliffhanger you guys last time, I had to make up for it.

Enjoy.

whoot, thanks Fel, now gives you the evil eye for the cliffhanger (even thou I haven't read it yet)
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I could get used to this publishing speed :)
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I guess I got 1 of my loose thread guesses tied up! :D
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Yep you get a one cookie for now. :D
Thanks for tha chapter, had to skip a party to read it immediately though. Kinda don't get the gravity of the cliffhanger though, I expected it, but not why it's so important...
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Woooooooooohooooooooo! I was just starting to have withdrawls and now I get another fix! :twisted: Thanks much sir Fel. :mrgreen:
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Oh I am SOOO happy right now!!

Thank you Fel!!

Found this in the chapter though:

“It means we’d have to reveal the Aegis, though,” Jesmind said seriously. “Nobody off Karis has seen him.”

Woops!!
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Yah, I do that a lot, I admit it. When I type that "J" it's like automatic to type Jesmind. That's why i'm very careful not to put many names in any story that start with T, or I type out Tarrin.

I didn't spellcheck it, and I don't put names in spellchecker libraries for that very reason. ;)

I'll fix it on my file here. Thanks for pointing it out.
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No problem at all my friend. Hell, go ahead and release the next chapter and I will look in that one too!! :lol: :lol:
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I hate when you do this Fel... :twisted: Why oh Why do you torment us so?
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Metatrone wrote:Yep you get a one cookie for now. :D
Thanks for tha chapter, had to skip a party to read it immediately though. Kinda don't get the gravity of the cliffhanger though, I expected it, but not why it's so important...

Yea it was expected ........

As for your quandry ....there are a few reasons why it's so important ....
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one is Kimdori!
“Events whirl and revolve as plans upset plans, Jason Fox, and you stand in the middle of it.
secrets with in secrets is best for the Why here.
Remember
“You have what the Faey lack, Jason Fox,” she said in a whisper, leaning in and breathing into his ear. “But their gifts are yours. Have you ever wondered why?”
“Of—of course I have,” he told her, his voice confused.
“No, you haven’t,” she breathed in his ear. “Always for you, it is the what, the how. The why is what matters here, Jason Fox. Why do you have the gifts of the Faey? The Faey have made the same mistake. They have answered the how, but they do not understand the why.”
And that why lead us to Find out what Jason realy was.

A Generation Part Faey, Part Human.......and Part Kimdori.

She is Part Kimdori and big Secrets are at stake.



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And in the fury of this darkest hour
I will be your light
A lifetime for this destiny
For I am Winter born
And in this moment..I will not run
It is my place to stand
We few shall carry hope
Within our bloodied hands
(bloodied hands)
And in our Dying, we're more alive-than we have ever been
I've lived for these few seconds
For I am Winter born
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I think the simplist way to explain why she is so dangerous is to remember that the reason that Jason and Myleena are so good at engineering is because it is genetic to them and this person is of the same line. Which means that she has the same genetics, she went to the same school as Jason. It would be like fighting an evil version of yourself. She will be able to do everything Jason does, have the same intuitive grasp of engineering, stronger telepathy and be telekinetic. After thinking on it awhile I thought up maybe she is bait in a trap for Jason. Why would you take a valuable asset as she is and run her thru Terra, where Jason has authority and they would have to know there would be Kimdori around snooping. I think its a setup, they let the info leak with a very short time frame so Jason wouldn't have time to think of all the angles. Well there is only one way to find out for sure, get cracking on that keyboard Fel!

P.S. I just thought of something else, since she is a generation and considered family by the Kimdori maybe they are not allowed to help Jason against her. Symone said it back in Subjugation that the Kimdori don't stop other Kimdori in the Game and remember that is what the Kimdori call the spying they do and the head spy is the Gamemaster. They know they are there but don't interfere. Maybe the same applies to the generations and that is why the Denmother is there to make sure Kiarri doesn't help Jason against her. If that is the case Kiaari won't be allowed to apprehend her nor track her. It will be a chase between her and Jason to Prius to get to the Empress and much harder to find her since he doesn't know what she looks like and the Kimdori might not be allowed to tell him. He would have to get close enough to sense her which would be dangerous.
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love this m8
thanks

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Oooh, shiny new story :mrgreen: ! Excellent work as usual, keep up teh good work. Look forward to seeing how teh intrigue plays out :D .
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Downdude wrote:Woooooooooohooooooooo! I was just starting to have withdrawls and now I get another fix! :twisted: Thanks much sir Fel. :mrgreen:
This is a most accurate description of what reading FEL s work is...
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