I didn't make very many changes in these, just a few little things.
Tower1: fixed the "east-west" typo, fixed Dolanna's last name (I changed it after I started the series and didn't catch these), spellchecked, added a few extra lines of dialogue to explain some things, added more detail to the opening scene with Tarrin in the forest.
Tower2: spellchecked, no changes (I don't think any were needed here).
Tower3: spellchecked, but to be honest, I didn't read this one all the way through...if anyone finds anything, lemme know.
edits: Tower, 1-3
edits: Tower, 1-3
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Just another guy from the shallow end of the gene pool.
Re: edits: Tower, 1-3
Missed this in Tower 1:
"She was a very regal-seeming woman, and moved with a commanding aire that all but announced to everyone that he was high born." (he->she)
"She was a very regal-seeming woman, and moved with a commanding aire that all but announced to everyone that he was high born." (he->she)
Re: edits: Tower, 1-3
Thanks for these edits. Maybe some of us can relive the series together now.
Re: edits: Tower, 1-3
and this is why the author often doesn't do his own editing. That slipped by the spellchecker and I didn't catch it, as I did the spellcheck after I finished the edit, so as to spellcheck my changes.
I'll fix that, but I'm not gonna re-release a chapter for 1 small typo.
I'll fix that, but I'm not gonna re-release a chapter for 1 small typo.
Just another guy from the shallow end of the gene pool.
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Re: edits: Tower, 1-3
Yup, those will never caught on by spellchecker. i wish I had one of those gestalt AIs that can then do all my editing. Hah... but first I must have the ambition to write.
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Re: edits: Tower, 1-3
In tower 2 you call Anrak Alrak.
“What’s your Ungardt grandfather’s name? I remember the last time he came to the village to see your mother, but nobody would even talk to him.”
“His name is Alrak. He’s very nice. He gave me a sword last time he was here, and gave mother anew axe.
edit: Hmm, just notice anew should be a new. :p
“What’s your Ungardt grandfather’s name? I remember the last time he came to the village to see your mother, but nobody would even talk to him.”
“His name is Alrak. He’s very nice. He gave me a sword last time he was here, and gave mother anew axe.
edit: Hmm, just notice anew should be a new. :p
Re: edits: Tower, 1-3
The linked files went poof!