edits: Tower, 1-3

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I didn't make very many changes in these, just a few little things.

Tower1: fixed the "east-west" typo, fixed Dolanna's last name (I changed it after I started the series and didn't catch these), spellchecked, added a few extra lines of dialogue to explain some things, added more detail to the opening scene with Tarrin in the forest.

Tower2: spellchecked, no changes (I don't think any were needed here).

Tower3: spellchecked, but to be honest, I didn't read this one all the way through...if anyone finds anything, lemme know. ;)
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Missed this in Tower 1:

"She was a very regal-seeming woman, and moved with a commanding aire that all but announced to everyone that he was high born." (he->she)
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Thanks for these edits. Maybe some of us can relive the series together now. :mrgreen:
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and this is why the author often doesn't do his own editing. That slipped by the spellchecker and I didn't catch it, as I did the spellcheck after I finished the edit, so as to spellcheck my changes.

I'll fix that, but I'm not gonna re-release a chapter for 1 small typo. ;)
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Yup, those will never caught on by spellchecker. i wish I had one of those gestalt AIs that can then do all my editing. Hah... but first I must have the ambition to write.

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In tower 2 you call Anrak Alrak.

“What’s your Ungardt grandfather’s name? I remember the last time he came to the village to see your mother, but nobody would even talk to him.”
“His name is Alrak. He’s very nice. He gave me a sword last time he was here, and gave mother anew axe.

edit: Hmm, just notice anew should be a new. :p
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The linked files went poof!
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