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Re: Revolution, Chapter 9.

Posted: Wed Nov 13, 2019 10:25 pm
by Wolfee
Thanks Fel!

Re: Revolution, Chapter 9.

Posted: Wed Nov 13, 2019 11:09 pm
by scooter012
THANKS FEL !!!!!!!!!

Re: Revolution, Chapter 9.

Posted: Wed Nov 13, 2019 11:09 pm
by scooter012
THANKS FEL !!!!!!!!!

Re: Revolution, Chapter 9.

Posted: Wed Nov 13, 2019 11:16 pm
by trodrian
Thanks FEL
:D

Re: Revolution, Chapter 9.

Posted: Thu Nov 14, 2019 1:14 am
by Not a ID
That was much a faster turn around than I had been expecting. Very good work.

Re: Revolution, Chapter 9.

Posted: Thu Nov 14, 2019 3:46 am
by betatester
This is indeed an surprise

Thanks Fel

Re: Revolution, Chapter 9.

Posted: Thu Nov 14, 2019 1:25 pm
by expedient
Thanks Fel! :mrgreen:

Re: Revolution, Chapter 9.

Posted: Thu Nov 14, 2019 5:47 pm
by Balaji1976
Thanks fel

Re: Revolution, Chapter 9.

Posted: Fri Nov 15, 2019 8:59 am
by Igi
Tnx Fel :)

Re: Revolution, Chapter 9.

Posted: Fri Nov 15, 2019 7:05 pm
by calista241
Wow. Fel must be on a roll.

Re: Revolution, Chapter 9.

Posted: Fri Nov 15, 2019 9:55 pm
by Lochar
So, it's actually pretty interesting to see the difference between the characters not being able to piece things together because they are living their lives, and what we as the readers see, because of economy of words only allows for so many feints and fakeouts because we have to be shown what's happening to some level.

Obviously at this point, it's the Faey Medical Service that is the cause, and it's because you know they had pre/post Generation data for Dahni and worked out how to engineer in general that change across all the Faey. Interesting that the metaphorical dragon's attack started to be pushed along because of Jason's own action of going to Earth to personally see the Farm Bureau get set right and getting the virus exposed to the super-ebola that had massive evolution features. And even without that, it's very likely it would have made it to Earth anyways in the 45 day windows of Faey visits, but would it have picked up that level of change anyways without a Generation that has been healed of the Mordon 'kill the Kimdori' poison, or even calling back to whatever Cybi did when they fixed Jason's merge issue with her?

All fun thoughts. Thanks Fel!

Re: Revolution, Chapter 9.

Posted: Sun Nov 17, 2019 7:37 pm
by Rakarath
Thank You Fel !

Re: Revolution, Chapter 9.

Posted: Sun Nov 17, 2019 9:34 pm
by zooplbr
Thanks Fel!
Perfect ending to my weekend!

Re: Revolution, Chapter 9.

Posted: Mon Nov 18, 2019 6:59 am
by wetnomad
Thanks Fel; and so soon after the last chapter. :)

Re: Revolution, Chapter 9.

Posted: Mon Nov 18, 2019 12:37 pm
by Redwolf1331
Another great chapter, Thanks Fel