Retribution, Chapter 11.

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Re: Retribution, Chapter 11.

Post by expedient » Fri Jul 20, 2018 4:08 pm

Thanks Fel :mrgreen:
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Re: Retribution, Chapter 11.

Post by GotToGo » Fri Jul 20, 2018 4:35 pm

Damn, I checked after 9:00 PM last night looking for something to read and must of missed the post by minutes! Decided to he a go to bed. Got up this morning had my coffee fix and hit the Honey-Do Jar and got to few done, but if I'd known the new chapter was up it would've been damned the Honney-Do Jar, Ha!


And Fel, I did see the dangling sentence and knew something get messed up and was going to notify you, but saw you already know, so waiting for the repost tonight, and thank you.
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Re: Retribution, Chapter 11.

Post by Balaji1976 » Fri Jul 20, 2018 4:38 pm

Thanks fel

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Re: Retribution, Chapter 11.

Post by zooplbr » Fri Jul 20, 2018 5:36 pm

YES!!! Thanks Fel!

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Re: Retribution, Chapter 11.

Post by scooter012 » Sat Jul 21, 2018 2:42 am

Thanks Fel
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Re: Retribution, Chapter 11.

Post by GotToGo » Sat Jul 21, 2018 3:01 am

Fel,

How do we known when corrected chapter is posted?

Thanks in advance.

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Re: Retribution, Chapter 11.

Post by bluemax65 » Sun Jul 22, 2018 12:22 am

Thank you.

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Re: Retribution, Chapter 11.

Post by Fel » Sun Jul 22, 2018 5:49 am

GotToGo wrote:
Sat Jul 21, 2018 3:01 am
Fel,

How do we known when corrected chapter is posted?

Thanks in advance.
When I get power back, I'll have the chance to post it. I haven't had power for two days now thanks to a pretty violent thunderstorm.

The correction only adds about 80 words, so you're not missing much. ;)
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Re: Retribution, Chapter 11.

Post by Cougar2k2 » Mon Jul 23, 2018 12:45 am

Thanks a ton Fel!
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Re: Retribution, Chapter 11.

Post by Rakarath » Mon Jul 23, 2018 7:46 pm

Many Thanks Fel !

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Re: Retribution, Chapter 11.

Post by Mari » Mon Jul 23, 2018 11:31 pm

Thank you Fel,
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Re: Retribution, Chapter 11.

Post by Kacoo » Tue Jul 24, 2018 3:50 am

Awesome, Thanks fel.

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Re: Retribution, Chapter 11.

Post by GotToGo » Tue Jul 24, 2018 11:47 pm

Fel wrote:
Sun Jul 22, 2018 5:49 am
GotToGo wrote:
Sat Jul 21, 2018 3:01 am
Fel,

How do we known when corrected chapter is posted?

Thanks in advance.
When I get power back, I'll have the chance to post it. I haven't had power for two days now thanks to a pretty violent thunderstorm.

The correction only adds about 80 words, so you're not missing much. ;)

Did you get your home power back up yet? If so, reposted dropped parts of the chapter? Also, have you heard or found you haved Zaa in two locations in one paragraph?


Great chapter by the way and I hope I don't sound like I'm complaining! Love all you do for us.

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Re: Retribution, Chapter 11.

Post by PhilippeO » Wed Jul 25, 2018 7:51 am

Thanks, Fel

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Re: Retribution, Chapter 11.

Post by mjkj » Wed Jul 25, 2018 3:19 pm

Thank you, Fel :)

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