Retribution, Chapter 10.

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Re: Retribution, Chapter 10.

Post by Rakarath » Mon Jul 02, 2018 3:46 pm

Thank you !

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Re: Retribution, Chapter 10.

Post by TLGG » Mon Jul 02, 2018 4:27 pm

Thanks Fel! You are the bestest!

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Re: Retribution, Chapter 10.

Post by JohnDelvfar » Mon Jul 02, 2018 5:20 pm

Greetings and thank you Fel

In my humble opinion this has got to be one of you best chapters you have ever written. I have read all of your stories to date and there have been many good chapters and even excellent ones. Your style with battles both personal and epic are second to none. Meshing detail with scale, not letting either overwhelm the story is truly one of your great strengths as a writer.

This chapter however showcases your growth in character development beyond all else. From the very beginning of this space opera Jason has had the bedrock of his morals and convictions to guide him but still with the black and white viewpoint of his youth. you have time and again shown us how, when he meets with a situation that causes him to reevaluate his beliefs, he can change yet still remain true to himself and choose his own path. this last chapter truly shows how far, how well, and how great he has become. Your writing, your incite, your growth has made this your best chapter yet.

Thank you for all your had work. I eagerly look forward to what comes next.

John Delvfar

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Re: Retribution, Chapter 10.

Post by Balaji1976 » Mon Jul 02, 2018 8:54 pm

Thanks fel, very good chapter

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Re: Retribution, Chapter 10.

Post by bherrm » Mon Jul 02, 2018 11:31 pm

Thanks!

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Re: Retribution, Chapter 10.

Post by Sancria » Tue Jul 03, 2018 5:59 am

Thank you Fel. That was one of the best chapters I have read in many years. I don't know how you do it but I can feel the emotion of the entire scene.
I'd gladly travel back in time, except I would have to wait longer for the next chapter of Fel's work...sorry, pass.

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Re: Retribution, Chapter 10.

Post by Mari » Tue Jul 03, 2018 6:29 am

Thank you so much I really appreciate you
Ships were never meant to stay in the Harbour.
They where meant for the the deep ocean waters.
They where created out of Hope, We where created out of Hope.

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Re: Retribution, Chapter 10.

Post by Mari » Tue Jul 03, 2018 7:01 am

JohnDelvfar wrote:
Mon Jul 02, 2018 5:20 pm
Greetings and thank you Fel

In my humble opinion this has got to be one of you best chapters you have ever written. I have read all of your stories to date and there have been many good chapters and even excellent ones. Your style with battles both personal and epic are second to none. Meshing detail with scale, not letting either overwhelm the story is truly one of your great strengths as a writer.

This chapter however showcases your growth in character development beyond all else. From the very beginning of this space opera Jason has had the bedrock of his morals and convictions to guide him but still with the black and white viewpoint of his youth. you have time and again shown us how, when he meets with a situation that causes him to reevaluate his beliefs, he can change yet still remain true to himself and choose his own path. this last chapter truly shows how far, how well, and how great he has become. Your writing, your incite, your growth has made this your best chapter yet.

Thank you for all your had work. I eagerly look forward to what comes next.

John Delvfar
In absolute Agreement on this. WOW
Ships were never meant to stay in the Harbour.
They where meant for the the deep ocean waters.
They where created out of Hope, We where created out of Hope.

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Re: Retribution, Chapter 10.

Post by Hearly » Tue Jul 03, 2018 1:19 pm

Thanks Fel, have a nice 4th

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Re: Retribution, Chapter 10.

Post by mjkj » Tue Jul 03, 2018 2:27 pm

Thank you, Fel :D

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Re: Retribution, Chapter 10.

Post by zooplbr » Tue Jul 03, 2018 6:48 pm

YES!
Thanks Fel!

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Re: Retribution, Chapter 10.

Post by trodrian » Tue Jul 03, 2018 8:15 pm

Wow, that really surprised me.

Thanks FEL

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Re: Retribution, Chapter 10.

Post by Kacoo » Tue Jul 03, 2018 10:49 pm

Champion, Thanks very much

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Re: Retribution, Chapter 10.

Post by crxbnt » Tue Jul 03, 2018 11:37 pm

Thank you Fel! I needed a fix. And you delivered.

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Re: Retribution, Chapter 10.

Post by calista241 » Wed Jul 04, 2018 1:52 pm

didn't see the story going in this direction. Very nice chapter Fel.

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