Conviction, Chapter 1.

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Re: Conviction, Chapter 1.

Post by expedient » Wed Oct 28, 2015 5:54 pm

I enjoyed that. Great chapter, thanks Fel :mrgreen:
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Re: Conviction, Chapter 1.

Post by ralbloke » Wed Oct 28, 2015 9:15 pm

Hi Fel

Thanks a lot, can't wait!
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Re: Conviction, Chapter 1.

Post by daggerfang » Wed Oct 28, 2015 10:17 pm

Great chapter.

But now I'm REALLY feeling the need for a wiki. Or at least a glossary. Lol.

Guess I'll need to do some re-reading. Woe is me. :shock: :lol:
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Re: Conviction, Chapter 1.

Post by mjkj » Thu Oct 29, 2015 5:07 pm

Thank you, Fel :)

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Re: Conviction, Chapter 1.

Post by Cougar2k2 » Thu Oct 29, 2015 9:57 pm

Whoot!! Can't wait to read it! Thanks a ton Fel!
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Re: Conviction, Chapter 1.

Post by ramouton » Fri Oct 30, 2015 6:07 am

Awesome Thanks Fel

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Re: Conviction, Chapter 1.

Post by Rakoroa » Fri Oct 30, 2015 12:44 pm

Wow, thanks Fel

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Re: Conviction, Chapter 1.

Post by mano77 » Sat Oct 31, 2015 7:26 pm

woot! reading this new chapter on halloween. one of my all time fav stories :)
thanks fel!

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Post by kinza » Sat Oct 31, 2015 9:15 pm

Thanks Fel =D

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Re: Conviction, Chapter 1.

Post by Mari » Wed Nov 04, 2015 5:45 am

Thank you Fel. This little bonus is appreciated.
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Post by tereszcz » Fri Nov 06, 2015 11:14 pm

Fel, thank you from the bottom of my heart.

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Re: Conviction, Chapter 1.

Post by D.F. Thompson » Sat Nov 07, 2015 6:36 pm

Enjoyed really good read Thank you very much
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Re: Conviction, Chapter 1.

Post by zooplbr » Sun Nov 08, 2015 10:01 pm

Ah Fel, your timing was perfect!
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Post by dellstart » Mon Nov 09, 2015 3:36 am

Wow :D
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Re: Conviction, Chapter 1.

Post by dstar » Sat Nov 14, 2015 5:44 pm

One quibble that just threw me. This bit is somewhat confusing:
The choice of the name Tianne wasn't all that surprising. She was a figure from Faey mythology whose closest comparison to Terran mythology was the Angel of Death, the first child of Aris that wasn't Baaen, the first of Aris' many half-god "love children" with mortal men, who was brought into Trelle's domain to serve the Trinity.
Is it Baaen that's 'the first of Aris' many half-god "love children"', or Tianne? Assuming it's the latter, it would probably be clearer if you moved 'the first child of Aris that wasn't Baaen' to the end.

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