Tribulation, chapter 3.

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Re: Tribulation, chapter 3.

Post by Fawks » Sun Jul 25, 2010 8:02 am

Sancria wrote:Wow that was a heavy chapter.
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Re: Tribulation, chapter 3.

Post by wizzo » Sun Jul 25, 2010 8:47 am

Thanks Fel

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Re: Tribulation, chapter 3.

Post by gesit » Sun Jul 25, 2010 10:23 am

great chapter m8
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Re: Tribulation, chapter 3.

Post by Delvfar » Sun Jul 25, 2010 4:47 pm

Thanks Fel. This is a very good chapter.
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Re: Tribulation, chapter 3.

Post by expedient » Sun Jul 25, 2010 6:35 pm

Great chapter Fel.
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Re: Tribulation, chapter 3.

Post by nicolai » Sun Jul 25, 2010 10:28 pm

Great chapter, and thank you! I have been suffering withdrawal. :mrgreen:

I noticed a few hints in there, but I'll not post that here.

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Re: Tribulation, chapter 3.

Post by medico69 » Sun Jul 25, 2010 10:39 pm

Another great chapter. Just what I needed to break up a boring day. Please keep up the great work.
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Re: Tribulation, chapter 3.

Post by michaelsuave » Mon Jul 26, 2010 12:23 am

A good chapter as always fel. Your writing helps inspire me to write better, and your ability to inspire emotion is second to none. Thanks for the good read. After reading that last chapter I think I'm going to take a break on the "is it done yet's"... thanks.
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Re: Tribulation, chapter 3.

Post by Mizriath » Mon Jul 26, 2010 12:30 am

Thanks Fel.... interesting Chapter. :D
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Re: Tribulation, chapter 3.

Post by wildph » Mon Jul 26, 2010 2:02 am

Hey Everyone,

The PDF copy on my iDisk public area has been updated, to include Tribulation chapter 3.

I'm looking forward to reading this one, though I'll probably not have time til later tomorrow.

Cheers

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Re: Tribulation, chapter 3.

Post by zedd » Mon Jul 26, 2010 11:36 am

I don't know if it was short or not (per your standards), but this was an awesome chapter Fel. Very good one.

Thank you

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Re: Tribulation, chapter 3.

Post by Bigwind » Tue Jul 27, 2010 12:41 am

I have just finished the chapter and all I can say is WOW!!!! I have read all of your stories and hang my head in shame that I hardly post at all. However, I can honestly say that that was one of best pieces of writing I have read, anywhere. I won't try and do a breakdown of the bits I thought were best etc as that would only diminish the quality of the whole thing.

Thank you for ALL of your writing which is always good.

I wait in patient but eager anticipation of the next chapter.
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Re: Tribulation, chapter 3.

Post by snafu » Tue Jul 27, 2010 11:11 pm

Man Fel, that was a good chapter.

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Re: Tribulation, chapter 3.

Post by Mizriath » Wed Jul 28, 2010 12:38 am

Thanks so very much FEL again. It raises my expectation levels... and now on withdrawal symptoms.
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Re: Tribulation, chapter 3.

Post by crxbnt » Fri Jul 30, 2010 1:50 am

Fel!

Of course you post this the day I leave on vacation! And of course this is the first chance I have had to connect! Cross country trips through the back country sure make cell coverage sparse, much less internet!

I will enjoy this, thanks!

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